The Apolyton Empire: Discussion

[Jack_www]

Liam Sheep after having his hideout blown up to smithereens has relocated to an unkown region of the world to conitue his war against the corrupt government in Apolyton.

There was an assaination attept against Chief of Staff Melian and the famous COlonel Cognac. Cognac, had been hit by the bullet, but Sheep has yet found out if he will survive. Melian escaped the blast of Gunpowder at her headqauters, as she was out of the office at the time. However 100 dedicated staff and scribes of the Chief persished.

That is all

FOR THE REVOLUTION!!!!

Sheep I dont mind having someone fighting against us, but you need to keep some things in mind when you post things. First off this is the 1400's. If you want to blow any kind of buildings up you would need tons of gun powered, and that is not so easy to sneek past anyone. Anther thing is that Colonel Cognac is in the woods hiding and going on covert missions, not even the Apolyton Army knows exactly were he is, so how could one of your agents know were he is??? He has no contact with the outside world, expect when he sends out s rider to tell us what he has done and seen. So this does not make any sense.

Please, if you want to plot against us make it more interesting. Just posting random bombings and assainations gets old after a while, and people get sick of it. Also if you kill our chacters in the story, then that means we are out of the game. You want most of the main chacters of a story to live so you can acutally have something to write about.

[Mellian]

Originally posted by foolish_icarus
do we have information on the improvements and facilities etc. present at the various cities?

not really, but i know Giovanni, who use to be the Domestic Advisor, mention some improvements for some cities in the first or second or third page.

all of the coastal cities have harbors

Arhei as no marketplace

Apolyton city as the Palace, Great Library, City walls with cannons, and etc



All i can remember from the story that as been mentioned or refered too.

but if you plan to be DOmestic Advisor, you can make the rest up if you wish

-Mellian

[foolish_icarus]

what medieval wonders have not yet been built?

[Mellian]

As for Wonders....

Apolyton as the Great Library

England as Magellan

Egypt as the Pyramids

Babylon as the Hanging Gardens

China as Sun-Tzu and the Great Wall (only civ with two wonders at the moment)



thats all i have at the moment... rest can be made up... also possible to make some new wonders and small wonders... as long it makes sense or copy the same benefits from another.

-Mellian

[Sheep]

Okay one thing to say to this nonesense about nonsencial thingyies. One yeah gunpowder is hard to move around, but as I have only recently been removed fro office I would still have connections.

In the Gunpwder Plot in Britain by the Catholics to blow up the Queen, they only failed when one member ragged on the scheme. Now if you want excitement in the story thats all fun and games, but as the story is progressing everone is all rosy with each other, the wart against the English can't go wrong. Now I don't want to play this kind of game.

Also it doesn't stop you guys stuffing me up all the time. Apply your own twisted logic.

Bah I hav had it with you jokers. This NES is gay!

[Sheep]

Originally posted by Jack_www


Anther thing is that Colonel Cognac is in the woods hiding and going on covert missions, not even the Apolyton Army knows exactly were he is, so how could one of your agents know were he is??? .

Agent with the Cognac Riders, use your imagination

[Sheep]

Originally posted by Jack_www
Also if you kill our chacters in the story, then that means we are out of the game. You want most of the main chacters of a story to live so you can acutally have something to write about.

I haven't killed abyone yet I have injured some and have made some people have problems but I won't take anyone out of the game, as I would've hoped you bestow upon me.

Anyway I could give a **** anymore

[Mellian]

In the Gunpwder Plot in Britain by the Catholics to blow up the Queen, they only failed when one member ragged on the scheme.

umm, Apolyton Palace was heavilly defended by the military, unlike the Queen's palace.

Now if you want excitement in the story thats all fun and games, but as the story is progressing everone is all rosy with each other, the wart against the English can't go wrong. Now I don't want to play this kind of game.

thee war can go wrong, but yur not being very creative and imaginatibe simply go around trying to assassinate and blow up stuff without much description.

Bah I hav had it with you jokers. This NES is gay!

First of all, APolyton Empire is not a NES. Second of all, i don't tolerate you using the "gay" in such a way.

Your the weakest link, buh bye.

-Mellian

[Mellian]

Just to inform you Sheep, i am keeping the moderators informed of this, so suggest you behave.

-Mellian

[mmtt]

It may be better to deal this with pms or whatever. I don't think flame war is really interesting IMHO.

[civman2000]

Sheep: If you would give some background to your actions it would be better. Yes, we don't know what your organization is doing internally, but it's still part of the story.

Also, I think it might be a nice idea for us to start losing the war...

proposal: If there is a unanimous vote (not including the person to be removed), someone can be removed from the game.

[Jack_www]

To Sheep:
Here is what I would do if I were your character in the story(note this is just some ideas)

One, try to find out what the Apolyton Army war plans are and give them to the English. This would really make the war bad for Apolyton and give the English upper hand.

Two, try and use the Republic movement to my advantage to take over the government some how, or place people into government that would be friendly towards me.

Three try and see if I can make allies in the Apolyton government. Maybe in millitary. If you get backing of millitary, that could help alot.

These are just some things I thave thought of and I am sure you can come up with more. We just get sick of your random assianations and bombings. You only post one a week, and when you do what you post makes no sense. We want to have interesting story, if you feel you can make it more interesting, with out having to have random assinations and bombings, and have real spy stuff going on, then write it.

[Sheep]

okay point taken, I have been busy with exams so my creative tendicies have been down, and when people start slagging me I get annoyed.

To Melian: Sorry to have upset you and I would like to continue the game if it is okay.

To civman: You can conduct this vote if you wish, I fully understand.

To the rest: I will try to be more creative.

[civman2000]

Sheep: on your latest post

[Mellian]

okay, we need ideas to make Apolyton Empire more interesting then just wars....

so any ideas anyone? i have a few, but don't want to simply throw it in...

-can have a short-live plagued that kills thousands

-another civil war, followed by the moderator's death... like between the peaceful republicans, militant republicans, monarchist aristocrats, and so on.

-we can begin peace talks once we surround London, which Elizabeth couldn't escape...and surrendered after massive cannon bombarbment, no realize the Apolyton forces have become after York, Warwick, Conventry and the heavy fighting in and out of London.