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Last edited by unscratchedfoot; March 14, 2003, 13:49.Here is an interesting scenario to check out. The Vietnam war is cool. -
A very interesting concept, I dont think Ive read anything quite like this before.Looking forward to seeing this one develop.A proud member of the "Apolyton Story Writers Guild".There are many great stories at the Civ 3 stories forum, do yourself a favour and visit the forum. Lose yourself in one of many epic tales and be inspired to write yourself, as I was. -
A very original representation of the cultural borders concept. Although I am not sure about the French zombies, it would be interesting to see how the idea develops further. Keep going
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Put the accountants on the ends...
Good job, keep it up.
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I like it too...
esp.the zombies
I'm going to rub some stakes on my face and pour beer on my chest while I listen Guns'nRoses welcome to the jungle and watch porno. Lesbian porno.
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Originally posted by vovansim
I am not sure about the French zombies
vovansim, the zombies aren't what you think. I have no intention of relating french people to zombies. You can find out what they're all about in the next episode. Thanks for the support everyone.Here is an interesting scenario to check out. The Vietnam war is cool.Comment
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Very interesting and different. I like it.Comment
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Now, looking forward to that next episode even more than before.Originally posted by unscratchedfoot
I have no intention of relating french people to zombies. You can find out what they're all about in the next episode.
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Ha! It's always nice to read about something that isn't just the war aspects of civ. I like the 4th wall aspect of this.Comment
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skippityLast edited by unscratchedfoot; October 17, 2002, 07:40.Here is an interesting scenario to check out. The Vietnam war is cool.Comment
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skipLast edited by unscratchedfoot; October 17, 2002, 07:41.Here is an interesting scenario to check out. The Vietnam war is cool.Comment
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Is this story too weird or what?Here is an interesting scenario to check out. The Vietnam war is cool.Comment
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No its okay but I think youve scared off all the accountants who visit this forum.I like what youre doing here and concept is definitely original but perhaps you should move the plot on a little faster so as not to stall the story.A proud member of the "Apolyton Story Writers Guild".There are many great stories at the Civ 3 stories forum, do yourself a favour and visit the forum. Lose yourself in one of many epic tales and be inspired to write yourself, as I was.Comment
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I definitely agree with Chrisius. By the fourth time you mention the accountants, it's not really funny any more.
Also, some parts of the last two posts seem to be a bit over the board with descriptiveness. You did a great job balancing the description of the situation with action in the very first part, but in the later ones, you are slipping off that balance. A little more action - not neccessarily violence, though, - and the story would be just awesome.Comment
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Okay. Thanks for your feedback. I felt the last 2 installments weren't up to snuff myself which was probably because I wrote them after my bedtime. I removed them and may even finish off this story sometime. Right now I'm too hungry though.Here is an interesting scenario to check out. The Vietnam war is cool.Comment
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