Battles (A poem)

[Metaliturtle]

Haha, I'm jumpin' on the poetry bandwagonorama.

Swords clashing
slashing
clubs bashing
smashing

a howl raises into the air
bloodlust is there

Banging on a city wall
hoping that it soon will fall
leader shouting, heed the call
the destruction conquers all

flying swiftly through the air
a new weapon, it doesn't care
swiftly death comes frome above

The End

[trickey]

Two thumbs up

I wish i could say something better but i haven't got a sweet clue about anything to do with poems. Then again i haven't got a sweet clue about stories.......

[civman2000]

no story in it ...that's what was good about DC's

[Metaliturtle]

(___|___) <----- My butt, it poo on you review civman
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