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  • #1

    Galley

    Ancient galley
    King of Sea
    Launched eighty
    BC

    Coastal sailer
    Battle prevailer
    Sailed in deeper
    Water

    Storms blowing
    Timber groaning
    Ship leaking
    Sinking

    Lost in wave
    She could not brave
    Did not crave
    Grave
    "I agree with everything i've heard you recently say-I hereby applaud Christantine The Great's rapid succession of good calls."-isaac brock
    "This has to be one of the most impressive accomplishments in the history of Apolyton, well done Chris"-monkspider (Refering to my Megamix summary)
    "You are redoing history by replaying the civs that made history."-Me
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  • #2
    Hmmm... needs more afro....
    First Master, Banan-Abbot of the Nana-stary, and Arch-Nan of the Order of the Sacred Banana.
    Marathon, the reason my friends and I have been playing the same hotseat game since 2006...

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    • #3
      looks like poetry is getting popular....try to put a story into it about the adventures of the galley and it'll be great!

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      • #4
        I really had to force out the last two stanzas since I was dry on ideas.

        Stories are too much effort.
        "I agree with everything i've heard you recently say-I hereby applaud Christantine The Great's rapid succession of good calls."-isaac brock
        "This has to be one of the most impressive accomplishments in the history of Apolyton, well done Chris"-monkspider (Refering to my Megamix summary)
        "You are redoing history by replaying the civs that made history."-Me

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        • #5
          think of just a simple story....the other poem didn't have much of one, but as long as there is some the fact that it's a poem does the rest!

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          • #6
            Aw welcome back Christantione- I thought you had forsworn Apolyton?
            -->Visit CGN!
            -->"Production! More Production! Production creates Wealth! Production creates more Jobs!"-Wendell Willkie -1944

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            • #7
              CGN is to calm for me.
              "I agree with everything i've heard you recently say-I hereby applaud Christantine The Great's rapid succession of good calls."-isaac brock
              "This has to be one of the most impressive accomplishments in the history of Apolyton, well done Chris"-monkspider (Refering to my Megamix summary)
              "You are redoing history by replaying the civs that made history."-Me

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              • #8
                Originally posted by civman2000
                think of just a simple story....the other poem didn't have much of one, but as long as there is some the fact that it's a poem does the rest!
                Hehe, that poem was supposed to have a story. Like I said, I ran out of ideas by the second stanza.
                "I agree with everything i've heard you recently say-I hereby applaud Christantine The Great's rapid succession of good calls."-isaac brock
                "This has to be one of the most impressive accomplishments in the history of Apolyton, well done Chris"-monkspider (Refering to my Megamix summary)
                "You are redoing history by replaying the civs that made history."-Me

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