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Fantastic as always!!!!!
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That was great! Reminded me of the Sx Sense at the ending.
Kman"I bet Ikarus eats his own spunk..."
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Kramerman - Creator and Author of The Epic Tale of Navalon in the Civ III Stories ForumComment
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Extremely well written, new twist on Civ stories.Comment
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Thank you gentlemen for your kind words.
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Great Story
A proud member of the "Apolyton Story Writers Guild".There are many great stories at the Civ 3 stories forum, do yourself a favour and visit the forum. Lose yourself in one of many epic tales and be inspired to write yourself, as I was.Comment
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Great to have you back, and a great story! Love the ending. If I may ask, where were you the whole time? I missed reading your very entertaining stories. I look forward to your next one."The first man who, having fenced off a plot of land, thought of saying, 'This is mine' and found people simple enough to believe him was the real founder of civil society. How many crimes, wars, murders, how many miseries and horrors might the human race had been spared by the one who, upon pulling up the stakes or filling in the ditch, had shouted to his fellow men: 'Beware of listening to this imposter; you are lost if you forget the fruits of the earth belong to all and that the earth belongs to no one." - Jean-Jacques RousseauComment
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Very satisfying. Great style, great story, and the payoff is extremely well presented!
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I had been sick for a while. had to have surgery, and then there were some complications resulting from that. When I was getting better, I also found myself preoccupied with other 'online' ventures, if you will, that took up a lot of time. (I help run a 'medal of honor' clan). Top that off with myself trying to write regular, ole fashion non civ related fiction, I hope that you can account for my absence.
Richelieu, thank you for your kind words...as always.
'Ice cream makes computers work better! Just spoon it in..."Comment
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Wow! You are certainly very busy.
I like all your stories and especially this one. Keep writing!
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Grundel, all I can say is wow. I'm glad you're back. Can't wait for more superbly written stories.Overworked and underpaid C/LTJG in the NJROTC
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