Well, this will be my second story on the boards. My first was a first person narrative of Egypt that I'm sure everyone was quite bored with. I hope to do better with this one.
This story did not actually occur. I wrote the first two chapters ahead of time, leaving the names of countries open, hoping that a situation would develop that would fit with this. But alas, nothing developed. So, I'm making this up as I go along. I haven't yet decided all of the countries or the world geography (I am certain, however, that it won't correspond with the real world).
All comments are appreciated, and I would also like to thank WTE_OzWolf for "Odyssey of a Hero". I borrowed little snippets of names from your story, because I don't really know any Roman names. If you mind, just tell me and I'll change them.
So, with no further delay, here is Chapter 1:
This story did not actually occur. I wrote the first two chapters ahead of time, leaving the names of countries open, hoping that a situation would develop that would fit with this. But alas, nothing developed. So, I'm making this up as I go along. I haven't yet decided all of the countries or the world geography (I am certain, however, that it won't correspond with the real world).
All comments are appreciated, and I would also like to thank WTE_OzWolf for "Odyssey of a Hero". I borrowed little snippets of names from your story, because I don't really know any Roman names. If you mind, just tell me and I'll change them.
So, with no further delay, here is Chapter 1:
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