Roma Victor - Rome against the World

[Herr David]

Yeah! Show'em barbarians!
Make them knee before the Throne of Rome!

[Knight]

I really appreciate all the positive feedback on this. Hopefully I'll be able to knock out the rest tomorrow, time and schedule willing. This isn't as polished as I'd like, mostly because I'm just writing and posting, but I like the way it's turned out so far. I'm actually trying to get some of my real original fiction published, so any good feedback about my writing style is very welcome.