Generations - Episode 2: From the Brink

[Sovy Kurosei]

I am a war mongerer, heheheh...

Although, I was sorta disappointed the Americans took over the world... The ending was a bit different, which I like.

I am currently playing another game, which I changed around a bit. Playing to my strengths, I say

[civman2000]

thats why you shouldnt attack like that...or let anyone get close technologically

PS: i cant see the map

[Sovy Kurosei]

Thats why you should smack the guys around while they are young...

And don't bother building the Manhatten Project...

Personally, I think that the Manhatten Project should be a small wonder :|

[WTE_OzWolf]

Aw...bugger...

You can't see the map because Geocities "suspended" it because I broke their terms of agreement.

Anyway, I've changed to link to another URL. Should be able to see it now.

[civman2000]

Originally posted by Sovy Kurosei
Personally, I think that the Manhatten Project should be a small wonder :|

Definitely...though it should be easier to build depending on how many people have already built it...

[civman2000]

i can see the map now

[johncmcleod]

Awesome story!!!! It is amazing, though it is extremely long. I was hooked by the time I read the first couple of paragraphs of Episode 1. How do you write so well, did you go to some writing college or something? Hey, I was wondering if you could tell me what was wrong with my story. It is really bad and I want to write another one, but I want to learn from my mistakes. I'd appreciate it if you could critique it a little. It is at http://apolyton.net/forums/showthrea...threadid=41965
Thanks

[WTE_OzWolf]

No, I didn't go to writing college or anything. Strangely enough, I'm a computer program, so somehow I've managed to keep my creative writing skills at the fore-front (maybe it had something to do with the two years of Geography and three years of military communications study I did at the Australian Defence Force Academy.

Hehe.

Anyway, I'll have a look at your story for you.

Cheer,

OzWolf

[Journier]

i used to know a guy named Ozwolf he was from australia to... weird.

[WTE_OzWolf]

Where abouts did you know him? There aren't too many of us (matter of fact, I'm the only one I've seen)

[Journier]

near Colac he lived.

i think thats the city Colac.

[civman2000]

Let's bump up the rest of the soon to be winner of the 1st unofficial story contest!

[civman2000]

I would like to bump up the new story contest champion!!!!!