The rise of Germany and fall of the Dutch

[rob006]

i hope you guys liked the final chapter... here is a long overdue map which will hopefully aid in you imagining where the cities where. The blue is ofcourse Germany, Orange is the Dutch. I named the cities that i mentioned in the story (if i missed any tell me). The cities with a blue dot mean that I (germany) captured the city. Purple dots mean that Portugal captured the city. (the city that is have blue, half purple is Lawuersoog, i captured it but they rebeled then portugal captured it (and razed it ) the auqua color dots are cities the Spanish captured. the dots that look like they are on fire are cities that where razed... notice who razed all of them (damned portuguese ).. also there were several more cities that the spanish, celts and portuguese captured, but they were in former England, and not nessecary for the story.

[vovan]

Good stuff, this, rob.

[rob006]

hey thanks alot vovan. and i noticed you nominated me for the story contest. thanks dude.. thats awesome. glad you liked it. im still playing the same game, and there have been so many wars... i may be able to get a few more sotories from this game alone! again, thanx for the comments, and nomination.

[unscratchedfoot]

Very nice battle report. I started to check myself over for bullet and shrapnel wounds after reading the Palace scrap. So this story is finished? Are you gonna write another one? I hope a more even fight next time or you fighting a losing war against impossible odds would be cool.

[rob006]

Originally posted by unscratchedfoot
Very nice battle report. I started to check myself over for bullet and shrapnel wounds after reading the Palace scrap. So this story is finished? Are you gonna write another one? I hope a more even fight next time or you fighting a losing war against impossible odds would be cool.

LMAO! Yeah i tried to get the battle for the palace really intense and all since it would be the last battle of the war. And yes this story is finished. But that does NOT mean in any way that i am done writing. i will definitly wrote another. it will probably be from this game since i am still playing it. And one thing i noticed is that it seemed like i was steamrolling over the Dutch, but that was only becasue my defenses crushed the Dutch invasion at the begininning of the war. (granted at the cost of one city ) roght now i dont really feel the urge to write about any of the recent wars, becasue none of them have been as clactic or world shaping as this war was. In fact, today i just finished a short war with the Celts (to my north-west), they attacked me... i took several of their cities they had in former England (to my south-east) and peace again came to Germany.... But definitly not the world... the other continent is in a bitter power struggle as every nation is at war. Persia is my most dangerous enemy, they have an empire about half the size of mine, but a huge army (they can support it since they are fascist). current, on the histograph score count, Persia is #1 with a more than 200 point lead over me, even though im still #2! But if an alliance decides to really come after me... id really be in a bit of a spot, my empire is so huge that i have only 1 infantry division in some cities! im spread so thin its reiculous... so the glory of Germany may not last much longer.. considering every nation is either furious or annoyed with me! must be jealous....

[rob006]

ya know what? since i don't really see any major wars in the near future of my game.. i think ill write a fictitious story about my empire and a 1 on 10 war! This will truely be an epic! wadda ya think?

[vovan]

Originally posted by rob006
ya know what? since i don't really see any major wars in the near future of my game.. i think ill write a fictitious story about my empire and a 1 on 10 war! This will truely be an epic! wadda ya think?

Go for it! It would be an enjoyable read. I'm looking forward to it already.

[ChrisiusMaximus]

Thats some good stuff there Rob just read the whole thing in one sitting and really enjoyed it

[rob006]

thanks Chrisius, glad you liked it.

ive got ch 1 already in the works for my next story.

[rob006]

just a selfish *bump* to see if i can get this story seconded in the contest ... god ... im such a competative bastard....

[Metaliturtle]

Rob, keep up the writing, I see good stuff in your future, much better than I was at your age is for sure!

[rob006]

thanks turtle. ill definatly keep it up... even though writing isnt my specialty. my real talent is art, like drawing and painting. but i still love to write... i just rarely ever finish a story lol

[Metaliturtle]

me neither... I barely start them