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    Hooded under electric eyes

    Funny how you can be changed, isn't it? I never used to wear any form of headgear at all- no hats, nothing.


    These days it's different. I wear hoodies, and when I'm walking through the city streets that hood stays up. That all started when I tried getting into a bar, and the bouncer refused to let my friend in because he was wearing a hat. They were polite about it, explaining that headgear makes it very difficult to identify peoples on their security cameras.


    Ever since then, the hood's been up.





    C.C.T.V.
    Find out what it means to me.




    Field of vision's closing in
    My world's not widescreen any more
    Hiding constitutes a sin
    Silent weapons for a quiet war.


    C.C.T.V.
    Find out what it means to me.





    You never see this coming. As a kid, I thought we'd all end up like Birds of Paradise- all decked out in colours and make-up. It would have ben a riot. Everyone's faces on display. I remember drawing pictures of people in that lumpy, kiddie-style manner, and their smiles were bigger than their torsos.

    Now I'm practically in a monk's cowl. Yep- didn't see that one coming..


    C.C.T.V.
    Find out what it means to me.




    But it's like armour. Get that hood up, and keep looking down. Watch the sodium lights dancing on the wet tarmac. You're bulletproof.

    A grey ghost passing.
    Hear the cameras overhead.
    Servos whirring as they track you.
    Contact not established.
    Identity not verified.
    No corroboration.
    Not established beyond reasonable doubt.

    Get that armour on. Get that hood up. You're the grit in the wheels, the gremlin in the works. In the drive towards omniscience you're that element of doubt that keeps it human.

    C.C.T.V.
    Find out what it means to me.



    C.C.T.V.
    Find out what it means to me.




    C.C.T.V.
    Find out what it means to me.





    Come on baby, let's go downtown.
    Let's put on our masks and disappear.


    The genesis of the "evil Finn" concept- Evil, evil Finland

  • #2
    Posted here because we haven't got a poetry/prose/images installations forum. Yet.
    The genesis of the "evil Finn" concept- Evil, evil Finland

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    • #3
      Brilliant!!!
      A proud member of the "Apolyton Story Writers Guild".There are many great stories at the Civ 3 stories forum, do yourself a favour and visit the forum. Lose yourself in one of many epic tales and be inspired to write yourself, as I was.

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      • #4
        MAGNIFICENT!!!!!

        I don't think we'll get a poetry/prose/image forum anytime soon, Laz, and right now I'm glad we don't have one because I don't know how often I'd check it and I would be reaaaally upset if I missed this.

        Beauttiful, honestly beautiful.
        Read Blessed be the Peacemakers | Read Political Freedom | Read Pax Germania: A Story of Redemption | Read Unrelated Matters | Read Stains of Blood and Ash | Read Ripper: A Glimpse into the Life of Gen. Jack Sterling | Read Deutschland Erwachte! | Read The Best Friend | Read A Mothers Day Poem | Read Deliver us From Evil | Read The Promised Land

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        • #5
          This is great. Thanks for posting it.
          My Civ Stories:
          Oil...and Sponges,Great Big Death Story of MRkorth, My Dinner With Xerxes, E.V.I.L., The Bijou - which I swear I will finish someday!, The Man Who Would Be King,, Will it Go ‘Round in Circles?, Man on the Street, Myron VS. the Volcano, Chairmen of the Border, The Turn of Time.

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          • #6
            Hauntingly Fantastic!
            "I am sick and tired of people who say that if you debate and you disagree with this administration somehow you're not patriotic. We should stand up and say we are Americans and we have a right to debate and disagree with any administration." - Hillary Clinton, 2003

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            • #7
              You have the touch

              Great !!!

              Thank you
              Gurka 17, People of the Valley
              I am of the Horde.

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              • #8
                well done on an old theme.. puts newness to it all
                GM of MAFIA #40 ,#41, #43, #45,#47,#49-#51,#53-#58,#61,#68,#70, #71

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                • #9
                  I finally read through this at long last...

                  eerie
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                  • #10
                    bloody oath it is

                    a shame some of the pics have gone
                    Gurka 17, People of the Valley
                    I am of the Horde.

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                    • #11
                      Weird.

                      Funny, cameras don't bother me one bit...
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                      • #12
                        good one, laz.
                        I wasn't born with enough middle fingers.
                        [Brandon Roderick? You mean Brock's Toadie?][Hanged from Yggdrasil]

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