Announcement

Collapse
No announcement yet.

Empires Divided

Collapse
X
 
  • Filter
  • Time
  • Show
Clear All
new posts

  • #16
    Tempest's Gift

    March 13, 1945

    Pierre Lafayette smiled as his three children raced across the white sandy beach, their footprints washed away by the gentle waves. The sunlight reflected off the great expanse of water before him, and he shielded his eyes against the dazzling brightness; next to him, his wife continued her reading from the comfort of a low hanging hammock suspended between two trees.

    The beach was relatively uncrowded; tourist season would not begin for another two weeks, although many vendors and businesses were already preparing for them: already, large signs were being raised all across the city, citing the many great luxuries and attractions of New Vegas.

    His youngest son was waving, trying to get his attention. Pierre waved back, assuring his son he had his undivided attention. The young boy then turned, following his two siblings into the water. Watching the three for a moment, Pierre eventually retreated into the shade offered by the small grove of trees, laying himself down onto one of the large white towels they had brought, and resumed his reading.

    Pierre opened his eyes, and slowly realized he had dozed off; looking at his clock, he saw he had been asleep for nearly an hour and a half; his wife was now toweling off the three children, who were eagerly unpacking snacks and drinks from a small cooler they had brought. Rising to his feet, Pierre helped them make the sandwiches they were so fond of.

    A napkin rose from the large picnic blanket they were eating on, and fluttered in the air. Giggling, one of the children raced after it, leaping into the air to grab it. Another napkin flew up, carried by the wind.

    Soon, the blanket itself was flittering at the edges, knocking over their plastic cups and plates as the wind continued to increase. Soon, their towels and discarded shirts were in danger of being carried away. When Pierre looked out at the sky, he quickly informed the children they were going; ignoring the inevitable complaining, he hurriedly began packing up their belongings.

    Huge black clouds were rolling in. A false night seemed to fall over the beach as the clouds obscured the sun. Swimmers were dashing out of the waters as some families gathered under the large pavilions that stood near the parking lots, hoping that sunny weather would quickly resume.

    Without warning, rain began to fall heavily on the city as the howling winds continued. Menacing waves now crashed against the now-empty beach. The sand castles that had once stood proudly on the sands had disappeared, the tempestuous sea leaving no trace of them behind.

    The abrupt and unexpected storm continued to increase, as New Vegas prepared for the worst.
    Last edited by Verto; March 31, 2004, 19:20.

    Comment


    • #17
      Fabulous stuff Verto, please keep it coming
      A proud member of the "Apolyton Story Writers Guild".There are many great stories at the Civ 3 stories forum, do yourself a favour and visit the forum. Lose yourself in one of many epic tales and be inspired to write yourself, as I was.

      Comment


      • #18
        Thanks

        Lafayette is a great character name, it always brings up great images from movies of the 40's and 50's...

        More please
        Gurka 17, People of the Valley
        I am of the Horde.

        Comment


        • #19
          Wow, that's a nice description of the coming storm! Could almost feel the rain drops on my skin. Would like to see more soon.
          XBox Live: VovanSim
          xbox.com (login required)
          Halo 3 Service Record (I fail at FPS...)
          Spore page

          Comment


          • #20
            [Update expected soon]

            Comment


            • #21
              Excellent
              Gurka 17, People of the Valley
              I am of the Horde.

              Comment


              • #22
                Looks like I lied. Wedding coming up this weekend, Spring Break after that, haven't had much time recently for serious writing, but the story will continue. Perhaps I'll be able to sit down sometime next week and add another chapter or so.

                Comment


                • #23
                  Good work. I hope that you can squeeze in another chaper or so sometime soon.

                  P.S. Im LDS too!
                  If I only had a brain...

                  Comment


                  • #24
                    Thanks Verto

                    glad you are having fun...

                    Hope you won't forget us though
                    Gurka 17, People of the Valley
                    I am of the Horde.

                    Comment


                    • #25
                      Sorry, NationStates has been consuming much of my time. I will repent, though!

                      Comment


                      • #26
                        hahahahhahahaha

                        cool, looking forward to your next contribution
                        Gurka 17, People of the Valley
                        I am of the Horde.

                        Comment


                        • #27
                          (Due to my rush to post some kind of update, I apologize in advance for errors, sloppy writing, etc.)

                          The Game's Afoot
                          March 15, 1945
                          Two days later...


                          Her blond hair dazzled under the bright set of lights arrayed around her, each positioned so as to enhance her already perfect facial features. Glittering blue eyes, a flawless smile. Her voice brought hope, security, fear, and sadness into the homes of millions each day. Her elegant manner, her every move graceful, she was the envy of countless women. Her outfits were each carefully selected and dutifully tailored to match her picturesque figure; the choice in clothing she made could make or break the latest fashion trends.

                          "Good evening America. I'm Selina Kyles, your Choice for News. Efforts continue this evening in the aftermath of Hurricane Ariel as residents struggle to salvage what is left in the wake of the worst natural disaster in twenty years. The hurricane is estimated to have killed nearly five hundred people and caused nearly four billion dollars in damage as it journeyed inland across the Middle Isles.

                          His Majesty has ordered a national week of mourning, and sent his condolences to those afflicted by this tragedy.

                          In other news..."


                          With a brief nod, the slim television went dim.

                          In a drastic change from their previous meetings, the ministers and advisors to Abraham Lincoln had been convened not in a metallic, sterile conference room, but in the splendid luxury of the Washington Palace. Originally built nearly three centuries ago, the Palace represented all the wealth and nobility of the American Empire. Once the home of the Royal Family and dozens of powerful nobles and countless extravagant dinners and balls, it was now rare that even top members of His Majesty's government were invited into the Palace, much less asked to meet in the East Study.

                          To most, the room was not so much a study as it was a library, rivalling that of most cities and universities. Tens of thousands of volumes filled the mahogany shelves that lined the walls, standing nearly twenty feet high. An immense table dominated one side of the room, a great mahogany monolith upon which some of the Kingdom's most important documents had been signed.

                          The fifteen ministers and confidantes were seated in plush, high backed chairs arranged around a stone fireplace large enough for three men to stand shoulder to shoulder in; standing with an arm resting on the exquisitely carved mantle, King Lincoln observed the debate amongst his ministers.

                          "I disagree," the Minister of the King's Treasury replied. "Clearly, the situation in New Vegas is not one we can afford to not take advantage of. If we delay in sending troops in, it would be just as well as to not send them in at all. Let me remind you, that hurricane didn't stop at New Vegas; the Spanish were hit by it as well. We need to send in troops immediately, or it will be too late."

                          The Minister of War cleared his throat. "I can have ten thousand men in Vegas before the day is out."

                          "Don't you think ten thousand troops to be excessive?" another minister asked.

                          The War Minister flashed him a look of disdain. "By tomorrow, the world will believe three thousand people have died. It is no secret that a large portion of the Vegas colony has wanted independence - most of them are still loyal to a dead France. We can cook up a story of some French separatist group taking advantage of the situation by trying to break away from the Kingdom; by the time our "humanitarian force" is on the ground, no one will have noticed the size. His Majesty's Fourth Fleet is performing naval exercises two days east of Vegas, they'll have arrived just as our ground forces have set up along the border."

                          Still appearing skeptical, the other minister nevertheless made no response.

                          Thoughtfully considering the past discussion, the King finally spoke; his cheerful mood, a drastic change, had been quite noticed by the ministers.

                          "Very well: in no more than three days time, we can have landed ten thousand men, reinforced by colonial militia, and brought in a carrier group to New Vegas. What will the Spanish do?"

                          With an imperious manner, the Minister of War almost brushed aside the question. The recent attention to the military had served to stroke his ego, to the irritation of his comrades.

                          "At first, nothing; they will buy the humanitarian excuse as will the rest of the world. As for the Fourth Fleet, they were performing naval exercises in the area, and His Majesty decided it would be best if they were nearby to provide any assistance necessary to aid the relief effort. All that would be left to do is fabricate a few French Separatist attacks, creating some link to the Spanish government, and then we'll have all the pretext we need. Spain's rubber will be His Majesty's in a matter of weeks, as will Alpha Centauri."

                          Comment


                          • #28
                            Whew! It's nice to see some intelligent writing after that storm in the off-topic forum. I just left my last post there and it has an interesting theory in it to confuse them with.

                            Keep the material coming Verto.

                            Are you a Reagan fan too? I like Reagan. He was the coolest president in history!
                            Here is an interesting scenario to check out. The Vietnam war is cool.

                            Comment


                            • #29
                              Great stuff Verto
                              A proud member of the "Apolyton Story Writers Guild".There are many great stories at the Civ 3 stories forum, do yourself a favour and visit the forum. Lose yourself in one of many epic tales and be inspired to write yourself, as I was.

                              Comment


                              • #30
                                NIce!

                                More please!
                                If I only had a brain...

                                Comment

                                Working...
                                X