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  • Chapter 17: Fangs of Rage

    I dunno about the quality here.

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    “The city of Leipzig seemed on the verge of surrender, apart from a few disastrous tank battles and ambushes performed by Timothy Rommel and his small one tank crew the British were facing an overwhelming victory, handing the Germans, who were never so united or strong as in Berlin, a crippling defeat.
    “Then the news of Bismarck’s survival reached the city. The British had tried to quarantine it, fearing the psychological effects of such news but even they knew that they couldn’t keep it quiet forever, Johan von Bismarck lived. Timothy Rommel, the desperado of the Reich, turned from villain to hero in a night, and dozens flocked to join him in his private theater of war.”
    - The German Uprising and its Principle Effects by Sir Edmund Barnes

    Timothy Rommel stared out into the small crowd of volunteers who remained, he had spent all night poring over the scratched up lists of accomplishments and qualifications he had had the recruits write up, and dividing them into squads, each led by the more competent men, with whom he had had breakfast that morning and acquainted himself with, trading stories from the old Army. He had given each of these men the battered supplies to make Molotov Cocktails, the few guns in his possession and maps to the British Armories to pass out to their Squads.

    He himself had taken both men who had claimed experience with tanks and a handful of raw volunteers to form the Reich’s first Mechanized Company, with the commandeered tank from Berlin and a half operational tank formed from the broken and salvaged pieces of British tanks that Derik and Karl had managed to mold together in ways that had rarely been conceived, save in nightmares, by the tanks original designers. The main turret was gone, and what was left was a tank base with a light armor dome where it had once been, a salvaged left track, and a pair of machine guns mounted on the dome. Much of the space that had once stored ammunition had been cleared out, and the tank had somehow, in a way that not even Derik and Karl could explain, been extended three feet and hollowed except for the motor to become an APC. It looked like hell, as many scars came from battle as came from the sloppy surgery of a pair of men who were well acquainted with tanks, but little acquainted with their construction.

    Rommel finished listing the Squads, strangers bound together under men he knew little of. He looked into the frightened eyes of those who hid with him, preparing themselves solemnly and fearfully to battle an Empire.

    He grinned at them, it seemed irreverent to their fear, ignoring it and putting it aside to make room for his own determination and optimism.

    “I remember an American poem I read once,” he laughed, to speak of poetry while he stood before them, “It was by Hetfield, a few of you know who I’m talking about.

    “I can remember it clearly, I was in the desert with the British Army, leading my Division through routine training exercises. I had been there a thousand times, and the entire thing was a cakewalk for me, I had seen it all already, I had been in that desert a thousand times on the same exercises, leading on occasion, as I was that time, and often following the lead of Generals whose eyes were as bored as my own with the desert. I took the poetry book with me to keep myself occupied in some fashion. The poem went a little like this, ‘Liberty or death, what we so proudly hail, once you provoke her, rattling of her tail, never begins it, never, but once engaged... never surrenders, showing the fangs of rage.’”

    Rommel grinned even wider as a few of the men uttered the famous poem with him, “The next day I saw something in that desert that I had never seen before, something I had never permitted myself to see before. I heard the screams I had never permitted myself to hear before, the terror of a Fatherland endangered. I felt like a traitor, I had turned my back and shut my eyes for too long and that very day Karl, Derik, I and a handful of others, long since dead, left. I promised myself that I would become those fangs of rage. But I lacked faith in Germany, I never imagined that this power, this…” he stared out, awed for a moment, “revolution was still in Germany. I was the fangs of rage on my own, mistrusting the nation I had vowed to serve after that day. Even when the evidence was there, in the streets of Leipzig and Berlin, even then I lacked faith. I took a contract to end the revolution and I was promised all of these lives would be saved. I stood there to deliver on the contract when I finally was given the faith, it was given to me by a man who never lacked faith in Germany, a man who I am proud to serve. You know the man, a man who believes in you as much as you apparently believe in him, the man whose life brought you here. Let’s take this for the Kaiser, Berlin is hardly a Reich, and every Kaiser deserves a Reich. As Mr. Hetfield would say, Liberty or Death.”

    The room was quiet, solemn, but the fear of a few moments ago had dissipated and in the quiet eyes of Germany there was a strength that could hardly be equaled by tanks.

    -

    The German banner flew freely outside of the headquarters, what had been an excavation site a lifetime ago, where Johan von Bismarck had met his destiny and where she stalked him even now. The Kaiser stood in the battle armor of his ancestors, in front of the grave of the greatest of them, the last who dared call himself Kaiser. The armor was steel, the full regalia of a knight, with the German Eagle painted in fading yellow across the breastplate. It was an anachronism, much like the nation that it represented.

    The past haunts us all, promises never fulfilled, hopes never achieved, troubles never vanquished, guilt clings to us as we submit to vices throughout our troubled lives. But the past held more than guilt for Britain, a thousand mild trespasses had built a fury in the heart of her ghosts, and lent those specters substance. The heart of the past kneeled before the grave of Otto von Bismarck, the revenge of a nation fermented itself in his heart, growing ripe with age and planning.

    The battered uniform of a former police officer intruded itself into the gravesite, breaking the spell of the past, bringing it into the cold and heartless present.

    “Sir, we’ve found something.”

    Johan stood, opening his eyes, “You could, perhaps, have chosen a better time Jacob.”

    “Sir, we intended to wait for you sir, but you’ve been in here for hours.”

    Johan checked his watch, shaking his head, “It’s all as well then.”

    The Kaiser stepped out of the tomb, not waiting for VonHoltz to follow him.

    “Sir, we’ve found something in the armory.”

    “The Armory? I’ve been there, nothing but relics. I can’t lead men into battle with swords and pikes.”

    “Sir, you can’t lead the unarmed either. This war isn’t about weapons, it’s about tactics and…”

    “Thank you kindly, Jacob. I had forgotten how to run the war.”

    VonHoltz glared at the Kaiser, “Mein herr, the catapults. We imagine that they could be quite useful.”

    Johan shot his eyes over his shoulder, “We aren’t here to imagine anymore. Imagination gave way to planning, and that’s given way to action. We are well past imagining.”

    “Sir,” VonHoltz gritted his teeth, “We started moving the catapults out an hour ago, there’s ammunition for them in storage as well.”

    “And the tanks, how will the British Armor measure up to this?”

    “We’ve found a few ignitable projectiles, they must have been experimental then.”

    “And well so, do you know what happened in the siege of München?”

    “No, sir,” Vonholtz admitted.

    “The Germans made a drive to recoup what they had lost to the British, they besieged München and started to fire, out of desperation, those very ignitables, only to end up burning down their own artillery, their own camp and loosing an entire army to their own ammunition, leave the ignitables behind, I don’t care how well you think they would measure up to tanks.”

    “Yes, sir.”

    Johan shook his head, “Do you realize that we’re grave robbing?”

    Jacob shook his head, “I prefer to think of them as gifts from the past.”

    “Gifts? When did the past ever give them to us? We’re stealing from the dead.”

    “Stealing from the dead? Do you know where your banner came from?”

    “It was sown by a grateful refugee.”

    “The design.”

    “The seal of the German Kaiser.”

    “When did he give it to you.”

    “It’s my birthright,” Johan was still walking ahead of the former policeman, keeping his eyes forward and pointed away from VonHoltz.

    “And the catapults? How are they different?”

    Johan grinned, he turned to show it to VonHoltz, that they could both bask in that rarity that was his humor.

    “Ahh, the smile of my Kaiser, I can die happy now.”

    Johan’s smile didn’t fade, “Excellent, If only there were more of you.”

    -

    The velvet cape floated down the stairs, billowing behind its owner.

    “Prince Richard, it’s a pleasure to have you here my liege.”

    The prince looked down his nose at the groveling MI6 man, “Get off of it Edward.”

    Edward Rhodes grinned, standing up, “All is according to plan in London, I presume?”

    “Yes, Edward, of course, I never fail to achieve my goals. I leave failure, apparently, to you.”

    “All will come to pass in our favor, My Prince.”

    “All will come to pass in our favor,” Richard took a mocking tone, “have you heard the news from Leipzig?”

    “There’s nothing happening in Leipzig.”

    “There’s a German Army in Leipzig. A f***ing army. Here we have rabble, unorganized resistance. In Leipzig their divided under officers and organized, there’s something big happening there and you still aren’t sending reinforcements.”

    “Sir, Berlin is getting out of hand, if I had more forces then maybe I could help Leipzig, but they’re bleeding us away out there.”

    Richard glared at him, “There’s nothing to be done about that as long as mother is on the throne, she has decided not to reinforce you, she has no intention of wasting more British blood on this rabble, and I don’t blame her.”

    “Sir, I warn you not to underestimate this, as you said, in Leipzig they have an army, in Berlin they aren’t as organized, but there are more of them. We’re falling apart here, and I need more forces.”

    Richard stepped fully off of the private jet, “We’ll talk about that later. As I said, as long as Mother is on the throne.”

    Edward laughed, walking with the prince to the headquarters.
    Last edited by SKILORD; July 20, 2004, 09:53.
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    • Well, gotta say mad props on any use of Metallica in a story, I'll have to admit that I always kind of mumbled that part though...
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      • “And well so, do you know what happened in the siege of Munich?”

        “No, sir,” Vonholtz admitted.
        Sorry, didn´t read too thoroughly yet, just flew it over. If that is said by Germans ("von Holtz"?) they´d probably use the real name of the city, München, not Munich (as the latter is an insult to the German language )
        Heinrich, King of Germany, Duke of Saxony in Cyclotron's amazing Holy Roman Empire NES
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        • Sorry Micha.

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          Honestly, turtle, I really wasn't to clear on those specific lyrics myself, I had originally intended to use something from Metal Millitia, but upon inspecting the lyrics I found them wholly unsuitable.
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          • Yeah, you'll have that...
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            • Originally posted by Micha

              Sorry, didn´t read too thoroughly yet, just flew it over. If that is said by Germans ("von Holtz"?) they´d probably use the real name of the city, München, not Munich (as the latter is an insult to the German language )
              Micha, you make misunderstanding. "Munich" might sound bad to German people but in the international community it is the name of that city, so better to accept it. If you say, "I am from Munchy." no one understand you and think you are on glue or just bought snacks from convenience store. Its the same in japanese language they make western names sound like half-dried glue paste for the sniffing. Example is conbeeny for convenience store, eeraki for Iraq, niyu yooku for new york, bankuba for vancouver etc...

              So when I speak japanese i use their goopy pronounciation too, not correct western names, because it is way to be understood. No one here understand "Iraq", especially their name for 'Gulf War' which is "One Gun Sensoo".
              Here is an interesting scenario to check out. The Vietnam war is cool.

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              • Hm, I see your point. But the characters in this story are going to revive the German language, so they probably use the real names just to piss off the English?
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                • Meh, I prefer that SKILORD not use German spellings etc. first of all I don't understand the story at all (90% of the German language sounds like swears to me) all I get is a big crazy battle, if it was a cartoon I would've muted it and played a Weird Al cd a long time ago. (The cartoons usually match, try it, it's funny!)
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                  • If it was a movie, I´d like it most if each spoke in their mother tongue with subtitles. Since that´s not an option here, maybe a translation should follow after the German parts? I´d hate to see those parts go, for they´re what I enjoy most
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                    • Originally posted by Metaliturtle
                      if it was a cartoon I would've muted it and played a Weird Al cd a long time ago.
                      Geee.... thanks.
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                      • Anyways, I'll be gone for a week starting tomorrow, I'm not happy about the whole matter of my absence, and for those of you who read this, trust me I'd rather just stay here, however destiny demands and rarely consults. I'll try to have a chapter up.
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                        • Originally posted by Metaliturtle
                          if it was a cartoon I would've muted it and played a Weird Al cd a long time ago. (The cartoons usually match, try it, it's funny!)
                          I prefer to mute skilord and have hardcore opera music accompany it so that I have to guess what they are screaming about.
                          Here is an interesting scenario to check out. The Vietnam war is cool.

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                          • I need to get back to this, but I'm having trouble as I'm in the process of going off to college.

                            I'll find time for you guys someday....
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                            • Ahh yes, college, a commitment of 20 hours a week where you get free room and board in the process

                              Seriously, 20 hours a week tops unless you're in Chemistry or Math or some other crazy science like that.
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                              • well.... my science is something like basic geology (wtf was my advisor thinking?)

                                Anyways, I didn't see you around much ur freshman year, did I... no. Besides, I have to put the fun into fun-damentalist and get myself into a better college than UNC-Greensboro.
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