Timeline

[PLATO]

I have worked on two or three drafts...I'm just not happy with what is coming out. I have this picture in my mind but am struggling to get it to paper. I will do my utmost to have something this weekend. I really want to share the tale that I have in mind and I am really sorry to keep everyone waiting.

[ChrisiusMaximus]

Oh come on PLATO did'nt I tell you not to take as long as me to update your story

I know I know this your idea of getting your own back is'nt it!! just cause I kept you all in suspenders over Fight for Freedom, you thought you'd drive me nuts as well.

Well congratulations you did it, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write some more Pretty Please, you know you love it when I beg

[PLATO]

Bismarck’s Tale
The Beginning

Bismarck woke from the shock of the landing. He gave himself a quick once over…nothing broken. Good. That was a start. He looked around the life pod he had been so ignobly thrown into. What had they given him? There was a metal storage box attached to what he had come to call the “front” of the cramped cabin. After some fiddling with the latches for a few minutes he was able to open it. Within were a set of rations (maybe a weeks worth), a small survival kit, an aboriginal spear and three scrolls. He looked at the spear with disgust…what was this for? Was he expected to hunt for food? He who had commanded a continent and bent an army of two billion people to his will? His disgust quickly changed to realization. That was exactly what they intended him to do. He sat down hard and exhaled with a heavy sigh. The road back to Alpha Centuari was going to be a long one.

Two of the scrolls were bound by simple twine, but there was something different about the third one. He picked it up and looked over it. It had the Justice Seal upon it. Bah! What further could those idiots have to say to him? Again the realization of his plight hit upon him. He tore open the seal and read the scroll.

“Bismarck,

You are now upon the world of your exile. Contained within in this storage box are the rudimentary items needed for your survival. The two scrolls contain knowledge from the dawn of time that will enable you to practice a trade and defend yourself among the barbarians of this world. Such was the judgment of The Council against the will of the court. This is the last communication that you will ever hear from our world. Your exile is permanent and irrevocable.”

Bismarck looked at the two scrolls. One was marked Warrior Code and one marked Bronze Working. At least this was something…not that he ever intended to work Bronze!
It was time to face this new world. He gathered up the items and made himself ready. He threw the latch on the seal and looked upon the new world. An unexpected voice broke the silence. “Module self destruct initiated…Self destruct will implement in ten minutes” Bismarck strode out to meet the dawn.

[PLATO]

Contact

Bismarck had been moving at a steady pace for two days now. The first order of business was survival. He had been looking for a sheltered place near water when he had seen the smoke on the horizon. Smoke meant people…people meant survival. People meant civilization and that meant power. Bismarck smiled.

The place of the smoke was drawing nearer now and Bismarck quickened his pace. As he was nearing what looked to be the last rise before reaching it he suddenly found himself face to face with three savages. How stupid of him not to have thought of sentries! Of course any group would post sentries. He vowed not to make this mistake again as he drew forth the spear he carried. Upon seeing him draw the spear, the three savages all drew clubs from their belts and begin to circle him. Their movements were awkward and clumsy to Bismarck. He assumed a defensive posture while trying to think of a way to keep from killing these fools. Just by what he had seen so far he felt not the least bit threatened. The one on the left (Bismarck had dubbed him “Blondie” for obvious reasons) moved toward Bismarck in a rush! Bismarck quickly swung the spear into line with him. He almost failed to see the one behind him draw a rock from his pouch. Ahh…very clever. Perhaps there was something to work with here. Bismarck stepped to his left, slid the spear down its length within his hand, and turned and swung the spear at the ankles of the rock thrower. As soon as he felt contact with flesh he was already shifting his weight to draw the blunt end of the spear into the stomach of the third savage that was charging at what appeared to be his exposed flank. With the maneuver complete and both savages lying on the ground, Bismarck swung the tip of the spear back in line with Blondie. He had guessed right that Blondie’s charge was a feint and the planned pause of it had allowed Bismarck the time he had needed to recover his position. He came to rest with the tip of the spear at Blondie’s throat. With his most authoritative voice he commanded, “Hold!” The sound seemed strange to Bismarck as the universal translator imbedded in his skull and neck did its work. Blondie stopped in his tracks. The two other savages begin to rise and Bismarck shifted his position so that he could maintain the spear at Blondie’s throat and still keep the other two in his sight.

“You are not Scythian,” Blondie said matter of factly. “Yes, I know,” Bismarck said. “I am a teacher from across the great mountains. I have come to you by will of the gods.” Blondie looked stunned for a moment and could do nothing. Slowly the words “From the gods…” came from his mouth and he dropped to the ground in a position of worship. The other two immediately followed suit. Bismarck could not help but smile. It would take some time, but what else did he have? To work then. “Rise my children…the gods have commanded me. We have much to do.” Bismarck and his three new acolytes began the short walk to the encampment.

[vovan]

Very good, PLATO. I wonder how the other leaders will gain their following? Or is this only going to be a story about Bismarck?

[PLATO]

Originally posted by vovan
Very good, PLATO. I wonder how the other leaders will gain their following? Or is this only going to be a story about Bismarck?

Thanks vovan. I am hoping to include all the leaders. Some have bigger parts to play than others.

[ChrisiusMaximus]

Well well PLATO, that was excellent, definitely an original plot. At least I dont think Ive read anything quite like this before.

You must keep at this it is going to be fantastic, I cant say it any more clearly the concept you have here is superb.

What concept ? the concept of these warmongers being cast out of civilised society on earth and exiled to a far off planet on the other side of the galaxy, then left for dead but with the tools for survival for a fighting chance. Brilliant!!!

You could quite litterally go in all sorts of directions with this and end up with a truly extroadinary and memorable story.

Thank you for continuiong this and I look forward to many happy hours ahead reading this story as it develops.

Great work

[ChrisiusMaximus]

Well well PLATO, that was excellent, definitely an original plot. At least I dont think Ive read anything quite like this before.

You must keep at this it is going to be fantastic, I cant say it any more clearly the concept you have here is superb.

What concept ? the concept of these warmongers being cast out of civilised society on earth and exiled to a far off planet on the other side of the galaxy, then left for dead but with the tools for survival for a fighting chance. Brilliant!!!

You could quite litterally go in all sorts of directions with this and end up with a truly extroadinary and memorable story.

Thank you for continuing this and I look forward to many happy hours ahead reading this story as it develops.

Great work

[PLATO]

Ceasar’s Tale

The Landing
Ceasar gasped for air and pulled at the restraining strap. The life pod was hurtling downward with a force of nearly 4 gravities. Something was definitely wrong. Ceasar was no expert on space travel, but he knew enough to know that this was not how it was supposed to be. As if in response to this thought, the computer chimed in with its own confirmation, “Approach aspect deviating from planned decent. Stabalizer control…Offline.” Stabalizer control? What the heck did that mean? Ceasar felt the huge weight upon his chest increasing by the second. “Please assume crash positions…Impact in fifeteen seconds,” the computer voice calmly informed him. “Crash?!?” thought Ceasar. What had those morons done to him? The full force of the impact was lost to him however, as Ceasar fell into unconciousness from the pressure of gravity upon him.


The man stood upon the hillside watching the strange meteor streak toward him across the sky. He studied it carefully, as he did most things. His brother always called him a dreamer, but he preferred to think of himself as a thinker. Was it not, after all, his decision to search out new lands for the tribe? Had he not proposed the planting of the seeds that now provided abundant berries to them? Had he not been the one to show them that drinking from above the wash area of the rivers caused less sickness? A dreamer? Hurmph!. Just because his brother was more larger and more fierce meant nothing to him. Just because he had shown the other men how to brandish the leg bones of the mountain bears as weapons…just because he had driven away the stinking horse riding vandals. Hurmph! His thought process was interrupted as the crashing sound of the meteor moving through the sky reached his ear. He tried to judge where it would come to ground and by dead reckoning figured that it would be in the hills about a mile from here. Keeping one eye on the ground and one on the meteor he began to move in that direction.

Ceasar woke to the acrid smell of burning plastic. His vision was clouded by the thick smoke. He fumbled with the restraining straps to get them loose and then tried to rise. He fell face first into the floor of the pod. He couldn’t seem to work his left leg. Ceasar looked down and saw two inches of metal protruding from his thigh and cursed. Slowly he drug himself to his feet and braced himself against the wall. He pulled the seal open and heard the computer say “Self destruct deactivated…Timer sequence disabled.” Self destruct? “Hmm,” thought Ceasar. How to use that to his advantage. As the smoke cleared by billowing out of the opening, Ceasar noticed a metal storage box toward the front of the craft and drug his body over to it. It contained a weapon , scrolls, rations, and a survival kit. Ceasar laughed at this attempt by the council to assuage their guilt at marooning him! As if this made up for them stripping him of his power! He laughed again as he remembered Bismarck’s parting comment to the judges. “Five thousand years,” thought Ceasar, “I’ll just have to do it in four thousand!” He laughed at the thought of Bismarck returning to Alpha Prime and seeing Ceasar sitting upon the throne!
Suddenly Ceasar’s thoughts were interrupted by the sound of approaching footsteps. He grabbed the spear and turned toward the seal.

The man had never seen an explosion like the one when the meteor had hit the ground. It seemed as if the whole earth trembled. The man was thrown to the ground from the force of it, but he had seen where it impacted as he fell. Quickly he got to his feet and dusted himself off. This was an amazing discovery! This must be studied. How could he convince his militant brother that they must stay in this area long enough for him to learn this meteor’s secrets? The man was upon the crater now and the sight brought even him to a pause. This looked like no meteor. He was expecting a large rock, but this was smooth and shiny. What manner of thing was this? As he watched from the top of the crater, suddenly part of the object opened up! The man drew back. Every instinct told him to run, but his thirst for knowledge kept him in place. Smoke came billowing out of the opening for a moment and then seemed to dissipate. Did he hear the sound of a man’s voice within? The man’ curiosity got the better of him. He must know what the secret of this meteor is! He made his way down the crater…slipping and disloging rocks as he went. Perhaps his brother could have made it down without disturbing the loose earth, but who cared? Their was mystery here and he meant to solve it. When he reached the opening, he peered into the cavity and was surprised to see the tip of a spear move toward his nose. It was a man! And inside a meteor too! The man held his ground and spread his arms, palms facing up and said, “Welcome…I am Romulus”

[ChrisiusMaximus]

Nice stuff

[PLATO]

Originally posted by ChrisiusMaximus
Nice stuff

Thanks Chrisius! Sorry it took me so long.

More to come...

[vovan]

Cool stuff, PLATO.

Leaves you wondering how the next leader fares.

[Paddy]

Thank you Plato.

Yes thank you very much.

[PLATO]

Thanks vovan and Paddy! It means so much to know others enjoy.

Cleopatra’s Tale
The wind blown sand made visibility near zero as Cleopatra walked across the barren landscape. What a god-forsaken place, she thought. Her life pod had landed well enough several miles behind her present location. She had been shocked when it promptly blew itself up just ten minutes after exiting it. She had slung the ration pack and the scrolls over her shoulder and started moving east, hopefully to the tiny stretch of green she had seen on her decent. She had been going for close to four hours through the desert, one plodding footstep after another, when the storm hit. What a storm it was! She was now moving at an angle to the wind, trying to keep the grit from entering her nose and mouth. Just when she thought she was in the best position, the wind would shift ever so slightly filling her nose with sand yet once again. Cleopatra was not deterred though. If anything, she was resilient. She drew here golden colored cloak around her head and shifted her direction slightly once again. At once, both cursing and daring the storm, onward she plodded through the haze.

During this time she took time to reflect on what had happened on Alpha Prime. How stupid were the wars that had led to her ruin! She had been empress of the northern island of the great sea. Hers had been a land of peace. Her people, while worked hard, were content under her rule. The prosperity they enjoyed had made them seem to forget the freedom they had under the old republic. Then that damnable Caesar and the horde he ruled could just not be content with what they had. The attack had been sudden, unprovoked, and horrible. Her response was equally terrible. Their allies had soon been brought into the fray. For five hundred years they had struggled and in the end their world was in shambles and their power stripped. Cleopatra vowed to herself, in this moment, that she would use whatever resources this world possessed to ensure that Caesar would soon see his end. She would not let him come to rule this world as he had attempted to do on their home world. Her vow strengthened her and the storm tempered her. Her being now felt alive with purpose.

The storm had continued for two days when it finally began to abate. Cleopatra had no idea how far off of the easterly line she had chosen that she might be. By dead reckoning and the occasional glimpse of the sun, she determined that she was perhaps south east of the green delta that she had been moving toward. Ahead of her she could make out a rocky and sparse terrain rising from the endless desert sand. At least the change would provide some variety. The closer she came to this new terrain, the more the storm waned. Cleopatra could now see some distance and begin to look for signs of life. Overhead she saw a small bird flying in her direction. It was apparently attracted to the glimmering of her garment. She paused and watched the bird as it drew near and then landed upon her shoulder. Cleopatra was taken aback by the birds beauty and grace. She mentally named the bird “Falcon” after the long dead General who had led her troops.

Suddenly she was startled as a group of men came over the rise in the rocky outcrop. They were clad in the garb that laborers of her world had worn…bear to the waste, a short work shiff and sandals. As they presented no threat, Cleopatra faced them aquarely and waited. The falcon on her shoulder cocked its head and seemed to be content to wait as well. The men shielded their eyes as they were staring into the late afternoon sun and froze as they saw the majestic Cleopatra standing there. Suddenly their was a burst of conversation among the men. Cleopatra could not make out their conversation from this distance, but one unfamiliar word kept ringing out to her…it was the name “Isis”.

[ChrisiusMaximus]

This just keeps getting better and better, I cant wait to see how you develop this thing.

One minor niggle, a few small typos need editing out.

Keep it coming PLATO