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  • The Pyre of Kirklareli

    Well, nuts, if we're doing stories here, then I'll bite. Here's one for you from a recent Ottoman game of mine.

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    The Grand Ottoman Republic had not known war in hundreds of years, and yet now, the great scourge had come to bear solely upon him. Soon, the Spanish tide would reach the slopes of Mount Nabil itself, for he knew his fief across the sea could not stand. All that was left to him was to wait, and await the exile that he knew would not end in his lifetime.

    The emir Rashan ibn Murad, the lord of Kirklareli and Nabil, stood atop the Sapphire Tower, the great citadel amidst the once teeming streets and boulevards of Kirklareli. The emir had made his fortune in the battles against the barbarians in the northern reaches of Urfala, the last land of the Ottoman continent to be civilized. Then, muskets had been a thing of the southlands, mere trinkets in the hands of the guards of the courtiers to showcase their great wealth. In the battles that finally wrested Urfala from the raiders of the frozen north, his men had fought with swords and maces and clashed in honorable warfare against enemies that they had never before met, but knew. In single combat, you knew men even without their names, he thought. You know them by their face, their stance, the words they speak or the silence they keep as they move swiftly back and forth, and then in to draw blood where they can. Now, he was more than a simple captain, and he longed for the days when he fought something other than a nameless horde.

    Not nameless, perhaps; Spanish. In the years of the late Sultan Osman IX, the empire had taken on a great expansion over the seas and across the Urfan isthmus. The pride of that expansion was beneath him, Kirklareli, the Gem of the western jungles, across the sea from Istanbul and the home of his people. Finding only the backwards Celts in this land, the Sultan directed an expedition to settle on the western tip of the great western continent, in a harbor under the shadow of the lone mountain, Nabil. The land was wet and thick with jungle, but rich in wealth, as it provided the entire empire with the rare jewels so craved by the Sultan and his court. It was for this reason he stood atop a Citadel named for the sapphire, and wore a circlet ringed with glittering diamonds. Kirklareli was his gem, the land across the sea that had become his home. To the north, though, were the Spanish, neither backwards nor weak, who had made a name for themselves across the known world with their vicious and ambitious works of conquest in the islands west of Urfala. When the city was founded, the Spanish had merely been a rival. Now they were enemies. The Queen Isabella’s greed for the wealth of the City of Jewels had led her conquistadores here, followed by her mail-clad legions of peasant infantry and steady columns of knights.

    The city in ascendance had been glorious; the city in decay was merely shameful. For a year now, the knights and heavily armored infantry had broken their teeth against the jungle strongholds outside Kirklareli, and now they rushed in hordes out of the jungles’ edge to smash against the ramparts of the city itself. Many of the people had fled when the fortress ring had begun to fall, and now only a few thousand remained who were unable to flee. The Celts to the west had closed their borders to refugees, and those that tried to make the journey through the jungles to Lindum died of disease or were cut down by Spanish cavalry that drew each day tighter about Kirklareli. The city was still large, but it was empty, whole markets and quarters deserted. The lonely neighborhoods showed the signs of the surrounding battle: crushed houses dotted the view, struck by catapult-stones, and many houses along the streets had been pulled down into rubble barricades to stop the onslaught that would come when the city was broken by the Spanish. And the emir knew it would come.

    ...
    Lime roots and treachery!
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    “Commander, the Sword of Edrine reports it has loaded the last of the south battery guns. The remaining batteries are in action still, what shall I do with them?” It was a sign of how little time was left that Captain Tansel bothered only with a cursory bow and salute, not waiting to be addressed. He stood by the emir’s side, clad in a burnished and engraved breastplate, broadsword at his hip, and a yellow plume tossing in the breeze atop his gilded helmet. The emir was dressed in much the same way, though with the great turban and jewel-laden circlet upon his head. The Captain waited at his side, anxiously, his eyes darting away towards the two galleons docked in the harbor.

    The emir gazed over the deserted city, and saw the new offensive. A wave of Spanish heavy cavalry, swords raised and lances lowered, erupted from the jungle’s edge. He could not see them well from this distance, but he could picture them well enough: Tall men with odd, peaked helmets and blue plumes, clad in heavy plate that yet did them little good against a musket ball. Here was this faceless enemy he waged war against; there was to be no single combat. As the wave exploded from the line of battered trees, the air splintered with the crack of muskets, and the north battery thundered with cannon and mortar. Under the bristling guns of the north ramparts, the cavalry seemed to slow, then fall upon itself and retreat back into the jungle, the cries of battle replaced with shrieks and then silence.

    “Load up the west battery as well, and instruct the north battery to expend all possible shot in a sweep of those trees. Have them prepare grape for new attacks. When the battery falls, fire the magazine.” The emir turned from his watch to the Captain. “Begin the general retreat of our reserves from the citadel to positions south of the city, and bring Captain Mourad to me.” The Captain bowed sharply, and ran briskly off, leaving the emir with the few soldiers that could be spared for his own guard. The emir motioned to his own guards, and they began their descent from their outlook atop the Sapphire Tower.

    The emir walked quickly with his guards to the docks, where civilians and reserve forces pushed wheeled artillery pieces onto the decks of the two galleons in harbor, the Sword of Edrine and the Scourge of Santander. A fine joke that was, for Santander was a Spanish city northwards, the port off which Ottoman frigates sunk two caravels loaded with troops headed for the coasts of Urfala. Without naval supremacy, the Spanish blow had only one place to fall.

    ... more tomorrow.
    Last edited by Cyclotron; December 19, 2003, 16:42.
    Lime roots and treachery!
    "Eventually you're left with a bunch of unmemorable posters like Cyclotron, pretending that they actually know anything about who they're debating pointless crap with." - Drake Tungsten

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    • #3
      Bring it on. Cheers mate, looking forward to the next component.
      Gurka 17, People of the Valley
      I am of the Horde.

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      • #5
        Excellent start
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        • #6
          The Captain of the Guns, Tansel, strode up to the emir, breathless. To his sides were a few guards, as well as a tall, dark man in a naval uniform and a clean-shaven young man who also wore a Captain’s breastplate and helmet, though with a powder-horn and a long pistol at his side in addition to a saber. The naval officer spoke first, giving a cursory bow and stroking his thick mustache as he spoke. “You’ll forgive me, ah, m’ command’r, neither the Sword nor the Scourge has any more room for the west battery guns, sir. I can’t fit any more in.” He spoke calmly enough to the emir, but seemed to be wishing constantly to look over his shoulder at his ship. The men of the fleet were only too anxious to leave Kirklareli, and escape to the open sea where Ottoman frigates ruled the waves.

          The emir nodded, and turned to Tansel. “Spike the remaining guns and roll them off the end of the pier. We will leave nothing to the Spaniards.” The air crackled again with distant musket-fire, and as ever the booming of the guns continued ceaselessly. The emir turned to the younger captain. “What is your report, Captain Mourad?”

          The young man seemed the only one with any excitement on his face, and he let escape a small smile as he spoke with the emir. Standing tall, he said, “Commander, Captain Rasheed gives his regards and informs me that the Second Musket Company at the northern ramparts is quickly running out of shot, and that he has lost many men.” For this, his face lost its smile for a few seconds. “He tells me his infantry, however, are solidly positioned and ready when the ammunition gives way.”

          The emir merely nodded. Rasheed would die today; he had campaigned with him in Urfala, and he would not abandon the ramparts until the Spaniards cut him down. The muskets sounded again, more sparingly now. The attacks had become more frequent as the mass graves in the north city grew fuller with Turkish casualties, man after man who had fallen in the endless fighting. Soon, however, there was to be an end. The reinforcements, men with these new muskets and shiploads of cannon and shot, had dried up in recent months. His thoughts flooded with bitterness towards the Sultan; neglected, his beautiful city was slowly gutted and destroyed. In the past months, the powder had come in only small shipments, the men in fewer. They ruled the seas, but no help was spared from Edrine. He had not tasted Antalyan spices in weeks, and had not seen new brigades of Sinopan musket-men in even more time.

          “Captain Mourad, take your company to the south brigade once they pierce our defenses. Draw them southward with sorties, and take the bulk of your force into the fortifications on Mount Nabil.” He paused, and spoke again, with a dark tone in his rough voice. “You know we do not have the ships to leave with your men, and you will buy us time as they try to dislodge you from the mountain. If you can hold out, we will return soon with new forces to retake the city.” Lies, for there would be no new forces, and even if there were he knew a single company of musket-men could not withstand the legions of knights and infantry that the Spanish were sure to hurl against the redoubts of Nabil once the city fell. Lies, but comforting lies, and it was good to give comfort to the dead. Most assuredly, Mourad was as doomed as Rashid. He would lose them both to the noblest cause.

          ...
          Last edited by Cyclotron; December 19, 2003, 16:57.
          Lime roots and treachery!
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          • #7
            Splendid stuff this!! please do give us more
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            • #8
              Captain Tansel spoke up. “Commander, what of the Asturians?” The emir was silent, and turned his eyes over the city, the smashed dome of the great cathedral and the empty homes that filled the city blocks. He saw the Sapphire Tower, and the smoke rising from the north battery. To the west, near the abandoned courthouse, was the block-like shape of the University. It was empty as well; the scholars and pupils had long since left on ships, the books taken with them, its echoing halls now used to keep prisoners. Seven months past, when his soldiers still dared to make raids past the walls of the city, two companies of crack Bolan heavy infantry stumbled across nearly two thousand Asturians, Spaniard civilians who had been clearing roads through the jungle to facilitate the advance of the attacking armies. They had surrendered with hardly a fight, and now they heard the guns of the batteries and raised muffled cheers from their prison.

              The emir turned back to the captains, and spoke in a voice that was commanding and utterly flat. “Bar the doors of the university tightly, spread the last of the oil and pitch, and fire the building with the prisoners inside. Make sure none are left alive.” Grimly, Captain Tansel nodded and hurried away with a quick bow. “Captain Mourad, take your men to their positions southward. Sailor, make ready to depart at my command.” Mourad saluted crisply and grinned. “For his grace Osman the Tenth, and for Istanbul’s glory.” With an elegant bow, he turned and walked in a stately manner to his forces southward.

              The emir Rashan ibn Murad stood at the base of the long pier, as the last of the west battery guns slipped with a splash into the waters of the cove. The fading musket-fire had become scattered and sporadic, nearly drowned out by the clashing of metal on metal. Surely the attackers had made their last thrust, and the men upon the ramparts now fought with mace and sword against the Spanish knights. They would die fighting the way he had known, the way men faced and fought with honor. All the muskets and cannons shipped from Edrine had not saved his city, and all the guns in Istanbul would not save it now.
              Last edited by Cyclotron; December 19, 2003, 21:00.
              Lime roots and treachery!
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              • #9
                With a tremendous, ripping explosion, a great pillar of flame and smoke shot from the location of the north battery. A few seconds later, the shock bore over the pier, fluttering the sails of the galleons. Smoke as black as pitch rose in great billowing clouds from the ruins of the north battery, and distant screams of terror and rage blew by his ears. The north battery’s magazine had been fired, as by his command, which meant the ramparts were overrun.

                “We depart. Bring both ships out and make for Edrine.” The sailor nodded, and rushed off. The emir walked up the ramps and onto the Scourge of Santander, and looked out from the deck. As the ships pulled away, he could make out the bright flames of the University building, the fiery tomb of the Asturians, and the great pillar of smoke from the north battery. White smoke drifted up from the base of Mount Nabil, and the scattered flash of muskets was visible in the city streets. Atop the Sapphire Tower, the Sultan's flag fell, replaced by a brilliant blue banner of the Salamancan Ride, the order of Spanish conquistadors already known to countless barbarian settlements in the north. Here was the might of the Spanish, the will that had proved stronger than the will of the Sultan, even without precious gunpowder. Here was a war without honor, a war where he had never seen the enemy faces, least of all the face of the Spanish commanders who directed their men onwards. Now conquistadores and their dogs swarmed over the streets, hunting down the hapless few citizens and stragglers that still remained. He heard their voices on the wind, shouting in their foreign words, and yet made out Isabella on their tongues.

                “I know you, Spaniards. I have not seen your face, but we have fought, and I see you for what you are.” His gaze wandered back to the quickly collapsing University, and the desperate screams from within. The Spaniards had reached it, but it made no difference for those doomed inside. “And now you know who I am. I trust we will meet again soon, and then it will be my turn to draw blood.”

                He felt a deep sadness for his city, the Gem of the West, which now was resigned to emptiness, war, and death. The last flag over Nabil had not yet fallen, but Kirklareli had already died months ago. This was merely its cremation, the purging of the dead city by fire and steel.

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                That's about it. Let me tell you, it was a tough thing losing that city in my game.
                Last edited by Cyclotron; December 19, 2003, 21:14.
                Lime roots and treachery!
                "Eventually you're left with a bunch of unmemorable posters like Cyclotron, pretending that they actually know anything about who they're debating pointless crap with." - Drake Tungsten

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                • #10
                  Well thank you kind Sir for sharing such a tale.

                  The lose of such a Gem, such a city, the memories that will ride with you for time to come.

                  Looking forward to your next story.
                  Gurka 17, People of the Valley
                  I am of the Horde.

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                  • #11
                    A cracking tale indeed ! well done, you should write more often
                    A proud member of the "Apolyton Story Writers Guild".There are many great stories at the Civ 3 stories forum, do yourself a favour and visit the forum. Lose yourself in one of many epic tales and be inspired to write yourself, as I was.

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                    • #12
                      Originally posted by ChrisiusMaximus
                      well done, you should write more often
                      Done, and done.

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                      At this hour, the sky was flaring brilliantly orange and red, and the sparse clouds in the sky seemed like rose-colored wisps of smoke, laced with the embers of dusk. The crimson sun sent rippling tides of color over the distant sea, casting long shadows of the small fishing vessels that were pulling slowly back to shore. The wind had begun to blow with an edge of cold as day faded in a brilliant conflagration, and it rustled the saffron banners over the sloping walls of Istanbul, the throne of the Ottoman Sultan, Osman the Tenth, light of religion, protector of the empire, and Grand Consul of the Ottoman Republic. Carried on the wind were the words of the muezzin, calling all the great city to prayer. As the glorious sun slipped into the western sea, darkening the dense glade of domes and minarets that crowded the Inner City, a whole nation turned in prayer to Sinop, the Forbidden City, the city called in the tongues of the ancient Arabs Mecca.

                      They were lost in history, much of the affairs of the early Arab tribes, but it was known that the Sultan Bayezid the Fourth began eight hundred years before the conquest of the lands controlled by the Arab tribes. Personally leading his columns of swordsmen, the Sultan had brought the army of the fledgling Ottoman state upon a treacherous jungle march that lasted for two entire months. Circumventing the Arab watchtowers, he brought his army over the high mountain passes that enclosed the vast jungles to the north, and swept down into Mecca, the main city of the Arab tribes. His forces fell upon Mecca with little mercy, and it was said that Bayezid himself rode upon his horse into the hall of Abu Bakr himself, lord of the Arabs, and hurled his spear through the Arab’s chest. Mecca had burned, and with the death of their leader the Arab state collapsed, their lands annexed under Ottoman rule, their people integrated into the great empire. Perhaps, however, after such a defeat the Arabs had still managed to triumph, thought the Sultan. Their lands and people are Ottoman, but when Mecca burned the troops spared the Great Oracle of Mecca, and thus allowed the religion of the Arabs to spread and convert the whole of the empire. Now upon those grounds was the grand and holy place of Sinop, the Forbidden City, in the center of which was the great dome of the Oracle to which every head in the Republic bowed.

                      The Sultan Osman the Tenth rose from his prayers upon the north portico of his great palace. This balcony atop the grand portico was built of white marble from far corners of the Republic, its flowing architecture a testament to power and wealth. Delicate marble screens, as fine as twining lace, covered the sides of the balcony. The last light of sunset glimmered through the ornate screens, tinting the white columns a rosy orange. With dusk approaching, the servants had lit the braziers upon the balcony, and the thick and sweet smell of incense now filled this overlook high over the city.

                      Murcian Incense, the Sultan thought to himself. Spanish Incense. After tonight, it will no more waft to my nose. I swear I will not burn incense again until Murcia is governed by my emirs or I am slain in my throne like a conquistador’s dog.

                      The Sultan looked not to the north-east, where the holy city of Sinop lay, but westward over the dark seas. It had been two months since Kirklareli had fallen to the Spanish by the count of the survivors who straggled into Edrine aboard a few galleons. The emir of Kirklareli had saved what he could, but even as he must surely despair the Sultan knew things went ever according to his plans. Tonight, he would pluck the sweetest fruit of all, victory, and ring the bells in all the holy places of the city. He, Osman the Tenth, would be the fist Sultan in two hundred years to truly be a Sultan.

                      The Sultan Osman wore a great silk turban, white as morning frost, a gift from the forests to the east where silkworm factories wove their precious cloth. In its center was a great ruby, nearly the size of a fist, and in its hems were nearly a hundred smaller gems that twinkled in the light of the braziers. The sultan looked out over the city and smiled beneath his curling mustache and thick beard.

                      “Your grace and majesty.” A deferential voice sounded softly behind him, and the Sultan turned with slow grace to acknowledge the visitor.

                      “Rise, Captain. What is it you trouble me with at this hour?”

                      The Captain bowed deeply, and answered without looking up at the Sultan. “Tariq al-Antalya is here, your holy grace. If you wish it, he humbly seeks an audience.”

                      “Then bring him here, Captain. And Captain… bring this to salar Ahmed. He will be at the palace stables.” The Sultan produced a small letter, sealed with red and gold wax in the Sultan’s family seal. The Captain bowed deeply again, and retreated from the patio without turning, closing the doors before him.
                      Last edited by Cyclotron; December 22, 2003, 03:10.
                      Lime roots and treachery!
                      "Eventually you're left with a bunch of unmemorable posters like Cyclotron, pretending that they actually know anything about who they're debating pointless crap with." - Drake Tungsten

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                      • #13
                        Excellent there is more. I thought when you stated 'Thats about it', that this story was finished.
                        I am very happy to find how wrong I am.

                        Thanks, and I agree with ChrisiusMaximus:

                        Originally posted by ChrisiusMaximus
                        A cracking tale indeed ! well done, you should write more often
                        Keep up the good work mate.
                        Gurka 17, People of the Valley
                        I am of the Horde.

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                        • #14
                          Very nice, I commend this work.
                          Read Blessed be the Peacemakers | Read Political Freedom | Read Pax Germania: A Story of Redemption | Read Unrelated Matters | Read Stains of Blood and Ash | Read Ripper: A Glimpse into the Life of Gen. Jack Sterling | Read Deutschland Erwachte! | Read The Best Friend | Read A Mothers Day Poem | Read Deliver us From Evil | Read The Promised Land

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                          • #15
                            Well, it was finished, but I decided to keep going.

                            At any rate, the day after tomorrow I'm going out of state for the holidays. I may or may not have another installation for you before then, but either way I'll have to finish it later. Thanks for the praise.
                            Lime roots and treachery!
                            "Eventually you're left with a bunch of unmemorable posters like Cyclotron, pretending that they actually know anything about who they're debating pointless crap with." - Drake Tungsten

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