People of the Valley

[Paddy]

Originally posted by vovansim


Well, maybe I am missing the sarcasm in that question, but... You know, faux pases, fax pauses.

As for the story, I can just say:



More please.

aaaahhhhhhhhhhh

very good.... very very good


thanks

[Paddy]

Our training was solid; our Bands were good to the core.

The scouts came in with Reports of Killing, raping and looting, and that this was continuing throughout the land of “La France”.

Word was quickly sent back to the “Blue” and the Council.

It was the French that need the most help, and fast. The rampaging Germans were decimating them. We had pledged our alliance to our friends many years before. We would be there to help them.

Dieppe; such a beautiful township on the bay of the great water.

“Blue” Holly took her Bands on their own journey into hell. The hills to the south would need to be taken to ensure the strategic ownership of Dieppe. Two Axe Bands were sent straight through the hills, like a hot blade through cold butter. The Horse Bands simultaneously charged the Township, with this leaving the third Axe Band in Reserve with the Field Bands.

The fighting was hard, very intense in places, yet the Horse and Axe vanquished the shocked Germans.

At the end of the Battle, “Blue” Holly found herself to be the Governor of a French Beachside resort town. At this time, the Axe and Field Bands gathered and assisted in garrisoning the town and getting the fields and mines operating again.

A Horse Band was set on a circular patrol, with the other two Horse Bands in Reserve, never too far apart. The scout bands were sent to secure the road into Dieppe for the Third column, which at this time was only a week away.

Back home, a full mobilization was under way. “Blue” had provided the council with evidence of French townships in Ruins, of people displaced and wandering the countryside, of Germanic units destroying roads and fields.

WAR was declared……………………..

[vovan]

Good addition, Paddy, but I think that you are starting to depart from your original style a bit. While in the previous installments, you told this as a story, I think towards the end of this one, it is starting to seem more like just a recall of what you did in the game, event by event. While there is really nothing wrong with that, I kind of liked the creativity of the previous chapters more.

[ChrisiusMaximus]

Great stuff

[Paddy]

Thanks for the feedback.

It helps in my learning, and enjoying this interesting craft.

[Kaos XIII]

Hey now, I like your activeness.

I've no constructive criticism to give, just mere encouragement.

So keep posting and keep these guys happy!

P.S, It's "Le France."

[Paddy]

Thanks.... translating the drunken into common... ahh it is fun.

[unscratchedfoot]

Bring on the war dude. Paddy, you're going into my next episode of Royal Service.

[Paddy]

thanks for that............ I hope...........

[ChrisiusMaximus]

Oh boy!! poor poor old Paddy gonna end up in Scratchy's story cleaning toilets with me and Dexters.

Dont be too afraid he sometimes makes us into heroes

[Paddy]

hahahaha

[Richelieu]

Very good read! I hope you continue!

NB: It is "La France" and not "Le France", as suggested in another post.

[Paddy]

Thanks for that...

More to arrive soon...

[vovan]

So, how 'bout those goods you promised, Paddy? You've created a loyal audience with this here piece and it (the audience) wants goods. Well... I do.

[Richelieu]

Originally posted by vovansim
So, how 'bout those goods you promised, Paddy? You've created a loyal audience with this here piece and it (the audience) wants goods. Well... I do.

Listen to the man Paddy: he knows what he's talking about!