Well, it’s been a real long time. I have not been to the stories forum since the beginning of the school year. I don’t know why, but I just couldn’t stand to be there anymore. I was writing Times of War and Diplomacy or whatever it was called but I couldn’t make progress in the story and I never even came close to finishing it. That really frustrated me I guess and it made me just not want to go back to the forum. I’ve decided it’s time to go back because I got an idea for story. Forgive me if a story just like this has been written, for I haven’t read any civ stories written in the last 8 months or so, so at least in my mind this story is original. (: This story was inspired by a game one of my friends played in Play the World. He told me about it, and I wrote a story about it. Of course this doesn’t happen in a civ game, but in a way the story could be an explanation for what happened. I don’t have play the world, but I should be able to write about it.
One more thing. I read somewhere that Turkey is like other eastern countries and the surname comes before the first name, so when I say General Ergun (not a real character) I am correctly referring to General Ergun Korkmaz. And, after you have read this story give me feedback! I don't think this is my best story yet, but I want to know what the critics have to say. And, if you’re reading this just as this thread has been posted remember to refresh it because this story will be a couple of posts.
A Falling Power
By John McLeod
SORU BRIEFING ROOM, NORTHERN ENGLAND
MAY 28
1830 HOURS
Desmond Watson walked towards the briefing room. Other operatives were filing in to the room. One could easily tell there was much tension in the air. SORU (Special Operations and Reconnaissance Unit) was rarely called to do missions, but when there was a mission it was a very important operation and always had a very high risk. Desmond walked into the mostly filled up room. He was one of the last to get in.
“Let’s get moving people!” Charles Foster, the commander of SORU barked to the stragglers. The last of the operatives sat down and the room went quiet. He began the briefing. “Tonight is the type of mission that you all have been training for since you joined this unit. It will be the most important operation in the history of this great country. Our future depends on this mission.”
“Our problem: The Ottoman Empire. As you all know, they hold 51% of the world’s land, and the land they own is some of the most rich and full of resources on earth. Their military is bigger as all of the other nations on earth combined. And they own about 54% percent of the earth’s nuclear stockpile. Today they have begun an invasion of Corlovado. They already have taken some of its border cities and are headed for its biggest city, Narlado. Spanish forces have been overwhelmed, and the colony will not last long. The fields of Corlovado contain much oil, and it is a great blow to the countries of the free world. What was once theory is now becoming fact. The Ottomans do not trade with anyone, they are communists. The more land and resources they take, the stronger they become and the weaker the rest of the world and the free market is, so it makes them more powerful. It is like the domino effect. This has gone on for a long time and it is how they have gotten so powerful. They can now destroy who they want to. We all watched on television as Carthage was swallowed up in only months. And now, we have reason to suspect that they are planning on invading the Iroquois after they are finished with Corlovado. Something must be done to stop this.”
“We believe we may have a solution. We have talked with the other nations of the world and they agree that our plan is a good one. It is to send you in on a mission. Your mission is to capture General Alpay Recber alive.” Nervous talking filled the room. “Silence. This mission is not as hard as you think, and when you succeed we will have the most powerful empire in earth’s history on their knees. They are a totalitarian state, without their leader they will be nothing and there will be much confusion. They will beg to get him back. We will hold him ransom. We will force the Turks to fire off their ICBMs harmlessly into space. If they refuse, we will kill Recber. That should persuade them.”
“We captured a Turkish transport helicopter. It is due to leave to carry supplies to the eastern border. It is supposed to take off near the border and it will fly over Istanbul on its way. You will be loaded onto the helicopter. Ground control will see it on RADAR and ask for clearance codes etc., for it is obviously the government’s, there is no private ownership. Our spies have gotten the clearance codes. And by the time ground control sees that we are hovering over Istanbul, we will already have the general.”
“When we fly over Istanbul we will land on the roof of the Presidential Palace. The reason this is possible is because we have the element of surprise. They’d never expect this to happen. Things might get tricky for the Palace Guards are very well trained. Once we land you will unload immediately onto the roof and neutralize all guards you encounter. You will break down the door of the building’s roof exit, or in this case entrance, and run down the stairs. There will be border guards patrolling the halls, but we do not think they will suspect anything. Transport helicopters frequently fly over the skies of Istanbul and the guards will think it is just another normal one. You will engage them immediately. Alpay’s room is just to the right of the where the stairs lead to. You will get into his bedroom, seize him, lead him back up the stairs and onto the roof, and take him into the helicopter. If this happens very quickly this mission could be a cakewalk. Red Team will stand on guard on the roof. Green Team will lead the assault into the building and capture Recber.” Desmond gulped. He was the leader of Green Team. “Blue and Gold Team will be right behind Green and will cover for them. Any questions?”
No one said anything. “Ok, let’s go!” The detachment of SORU arose from their seats and headed out the doors to the armory. The personnel handed the men their weapons. They were given Yorkshire D3D5 Assault Rifles. They took magazines and loaded them into the weapons. The whole process got their adrenaline going. They were ready to change the world. All 24 of them headed out towards the transport helicopter. Two by two they stepped in and filled it, and then closed the door. The helicopter took off, and they stared out the small windows of it. They looked at their home land, realizing it would be a while before they’d be on the ground safely if that ever even happened.
Desmond felt very uneasy. He doubted the mission. “What if the guards get Alpay out of his room and get him away before we can get him?” he thought to himself. “We would be caught in a firefight with some of the most well trained men in the world. We’d all perish.” He pushed the thoughts out of his mind. The officers would not send them on a mission like this if there wasn’t a good chance of success, he assured himself. He looked out the windows to get his thoughts off the op. The hours went by, and Desmond stared out at the country below him.
All of the land of the Ottoman Empire had the same dreary aura to it. The people of former countries were oppressed to say the least. They had many unanswered prayers, hopes, and dreams, trying to escape from a prison with invisible walls. They were waiting for the day to come when they would be liberated, for the day when they would have freedom. They always seemed to get their hopes up, and then they’d hear of another victory for the empire, and they’d sink into utter despair. Desmond realized that freedom in the world was on a decline, and the places where people were free were becoming less numbered. Desmond planned on moving either Rome or Germany soon, for because of the location of those countries they’d probably be the last to be conquered by the Ottoman Empire. He believed, along with many other people, that during his lifetime those two nations would be the last free nations.
Once they flew over the originally Turkish areas, despair turned into zeal. The people were ‘good’ communists. They turned in anyone expected of treason, talked and acted as if they were propaganda, and worked very hard to help the nation achieve the goal of world domination. It was the ideal totalitarian state.
Desmond began to feel much more nervous as they came closer to Istanbul. The talking among the operatives had ceased. They were seeing the elephant. The pilot then started naming off intervals of their estimated time of arrival. It started at a half an hour and they got closer and closer to Istanbul. “ETA thirty seconds,” the pilot said. Desmond’s heart started to pound. A few seconds later he looked out the window and saw the palace. It was white with a simple rectangular yet appealing design. It had a golden dome, and was the building was an example of traditional Eastern architecture. The helicopter got closer and closer to the building. The roof had a short parapet that looked like a white banister. It had columns side by side. He could make out a few figures on the roof. They were guards. The helicopter changed direction, now heading straight for the palace. Their altitude was hardly above the palace’s, and they only dropped a little. The helicopter turned, and the doors slid open. “Move! Move! Move!” The commander of the operation yelled.
The operatives jumped out of the helicopter. Red Team jumped out first. The guards had stopped their patrol and were facing the helicopter. Most of the guards patrolled the perimeter of the palace, not expecting an airborne attack, and there were only 4 on the roof. They did not know what was happening. And then Red Team opened fire on them. They all were hit without having time to fire back. Desmond’s team jumped out next. He lead the way, and motioned for them to follow right behind them. Time was of the essence.
He sprinted towards to door leading to the inside. He didn’t stop running when he got to it and just kicked it. The kick, fueled by adrenaline, was very powerful and knocked over the door. He sprinted down the stairs, his fellow operatives right behind. He immediately fired at a nearby guard patrolling the hallway. The bullets tore right through the guard’s brown uniform. The guard fell to his knees, and then to the ground. The operatives behind him shot at the guards across the balcony looking over the main floor. There were two of them, and they both were hit and fell almost instantly. Desmond then opened fire at a guard guarding Recber’s bedroom. The guard almost had time to fire back, but he was hit in the stomach several times and then in the neck. He slumped over and fell to the ground. His team sprinted towards Recber’s bedroom. Another guard from across the balcony peaked out from behind the corner of a wall and fired at them, but he missed and stepped back for cover.
“THEY’RE GOING FOR THE GENERAL!! THEY’RE GOING AFTER THE GENERAL!! RUN!! RUN!! QUICK!!” He screamed at the tops of his lungs in Turkish. There was more alarmed yelling from the guards and they sprinted towards the stairs from the main floor. The first few to get up were immediately taken out by the members of Blue and Gold teams. Every time a guard came into view he fell.
Desmond got to the bedroom. He pushed open the door and stormed into the room. He grabbed and threw General Alpay out of his bed. He was big and strong but almost fell over, being very groggy and not understanding what was happening. Desmond pushed him forward and the team ran out the room pushing Alpay along. They sprinted for the stairs. More alarmed, yelling guards were coming, running up the stairs yelling and firing on the SORU operatives. Then a large group of them ran up the stairs all at once. The operatives covering fired upon them. A few were hit, but the others fired back. The soldier operative behind Desmond was hit several times. He was dead. Desmond grabbed him and carried him. The English never leave their dead behind. Another one of the guards stepped out from behind his cover and fired at the operatives covering Green Team. He hit one of them in several places. The operative still hung on and shot back and killed the guard.
Desmond ran his team up the stairs under heavy fire. The covering teams fired a little bit more and then sprinted after Green Team. They ran out into the open night sky. They were sprinting despite a couple of them carrying dead or wounded. Desmond dragged the dead one towards the helicopter, running as fast as he could. He saw Red Team operatives in front of him firing back at packs of guards chasing after the general. Desmond pushed Alpay and his wounded fellow soldier into the helicopter and jumped in himself. More operatives began jumping into the helicopter. In a few seconds they were all in except for Red Team. One by one the members of that team jumped into the helicopter, the others firing at the guards. One was hit, but he was thrown into the helicopter. The last one finally jumped in. The helicopter elevated. The doors were kept open so the operatives could fire at the guards. Once the helicopter was in the air, the doors were closed. The guards stopped firing. One raised up his weapon, but another one put it down and explained to him it wasn’t a good idea to cause the helicopter that the General was in to crash.
The whole thing happened so fast. It may have been less than 25 seconds. Desmond thought about it, and he realized how lucky he was not to get shot. He had gotten very close to being killed, and the thought of it made him feel sick.
OTTOMAN CRISIS CENTER, ISTANBUL
MAY 29
0045 HOURS
The Tayfur Haydar, the Chief Advisor, was by law in command when General Alpay was absent or unable to perform his duties. He had just been woken up and told of what had happened merely minutes ago. He stormed into the Crisis Center. It was a very large room full of aides, advisors, military officers, and other officials working at phone lines, trying to bring order to the situation. It was full of chaos and frantic people. “Could somebody tell me how this could possibly happen?” Tayfur demanded.
One of his aides answered. “English special forces landed on the rooftop, took out the guards, stormed into the palace, took the General, and ran out.”
“I know what happened, you d**ned fool, I want to know why and how it happened.” The captain of the Palace Guards, Nihat Mustafa, walked by, and Tayfur furiously questioned him. “How could you be stupid enough to let this happen?! The General is the most important man in the world, and you have such little security for him that a few English captured him without much of a fight!”
“Sir, we never expected this to happen. The air traffic is very regulated, and it is almost impossible for an aircraft to somehow get by and get to the palace by air. So most of our guards patrol the yards and perimeter of the palace grounds. The guards on the top floor where outnumbered and overwhelmed. They got Alpay away just seconds before several large groups of guards got to them.”
“Never in the history of the Empire has anything so terrible happened!” Tayfur bellowed. Several people shamefully looked up, and then went back to their work.
“Calm down, comrade,” Alpay Kerimoglu haughtily replied. “Yelling won’t get us anywhere,” he corrected. He was the General’s only son, and very arrogant. Tayfur could not stand him. He would have taken Kerimoglu out with Turkish (formerly Korean) martial arts if he wasn’t the General’s relative.
“Sir, the Prime Minister of England is on the phone,” his aide told him. Tayfur went into the conference room, closed the door, and picked up the red phone. It was a fairly decent size room with a large round table in it. The wall between it and the crisis room was glass.
One more thing. I read somewhere that Turkey is like other eastern countries and the surname comes before the first name, so when I say General Ergun (not a real character) I am correctly referring to General Ergun Korkmaz. And, after you have read this story give me feedback! I don't think this is my best story yet, but I want to know what the critics have to say. And, if you’re reading this just as this thread has been posted remember to refresh it because this story will be a couple of posts.
A Falling Power
By John McLeod
SORU BRIEFING ROOM, NORTHERN ENGLAND
MAY 28
1830 HOURS
Desmond Watson walked towards the briefing room. Other operatives were filing in to the room. One could easily tell there was much tension in the air. SORU (Special Operations and Reconnaissance Unit) was rarely called to do missions, but when there was a mission it was a very important operation and always had a very high risk. Desmond walked into the mostly filled up room. He was one of the last to get in.
“Let’s get moving people!” Charles Foster, the commander of SORU barked to the stragglers. The last of the operatives sat down and the room went quiet. He began the briefing. “Tonight is the type of mission that you all have been training for since you joined this unit. It will be the most important operation in the history of this great country. Our future depends on this mission.”
“Our problem: The Ottoman Empire. As you all know, they hold 51% of the world’s land, and the land they own is some of the most rich and full of resources on earth. Their military is bigger as all of the other nations on earth combined. And they own about 54% percent of the earth’s nuclear stockpile. Today they have begun an invasion of Corlovado. They already have taken some of its border cities and are headed for its biggest city, Narlado. Spanish forces have been overwhelmed, and the colony will not last long. The fields of Corlovado contain much oil, and it is a great blow to the countries of the free world. What was once theory is now becoming fact. The Ottomans do not trade with anyone, they are communists. The more land and resources they take, the stronger they become and the weaker the rest of the world and the free market is, so it makes them more powerful. It is like the domino effect. This has gone on for a long time and it is how they have gotten so powerful. They can now destroy who they want to. We all watched on television as Carthage was swallowed up in only months. And now, we have reason to suspect that they are planning on invading the Iroquois after they are finished with Corlovado. Something must be done to stop this.”
“We believe we may have a solution. We have talked with the other nations of the world and they agree that our plan is a good one. It is to send you in on a mission. Your mission is to capture General Alpay Recber alive.” Nervous talking filled the room. “Silence. This mission is not as hard as you think, and when you succeed we will have the most powerful empire in earth’s history on their knees. They are a totalitarian state, without their leader they will be nothing and there will be much confusion. They will beg to get him back. We will hold him ransom. We will force the Turks to fire off their ICBMs harmlessly into space. If they refuse, we will kill Recber. That should persuade them.”
“We captured a Turkish transport helicopter. It is due to leave to carry supplies to the eastern border. It is supposed to take off near the border and it will fly over Istanbul on its way. You will be loaded onto the helicopter. Ground control will see it on RADAR and ask for clearance codes etc., for it is obviously the government’s, there is no private ownership. Our spies have gotten the clearance codes. And by the time ground control sees that we are hovering over Istanbul, we will already have the general.”
“When we fly over Istanbul we will land on the roof of the Presidential Palace. The reason this is possible is because we have the element of surprise. They’d never expect this to happen. Things might get tricky for the Palace Guards are very well trained. Once we land you will unload immediately onto the roof and neutralize all guards you encounter. You will break down the door of the building’s roof exit, or in this case entrance, and run down the stairs. There will be border guards patrolling the halls, but we do not think they will suspect anything. Transport helicopters frequently fly over the skies of Istanbul and the guards will think it is just another normal one. You will engage them immediately. Alpay’s room is just to the right of the where the stairs lead to. You will get into his bedroom, seize him, lead him back up the stairs and onto the roof, and take him into the helicopter. If this happens very quickly this mission could be a cakewalk. Red Team will stand on guard on the roof. Green Team will lead the assault into the building and capture Recber.” Desmond gulped. He was the leader of Green Team. “Blue and Gold Team will be right behind Green and will cover for them. Any questions?”
No one said anything. “Ok, let’s go!” The detachment of SORU arose from their seats and headed out the doors to the armory. The personnel handed the men their weapons. They were given Yorkshire D3D5 Assault Rifles. They took magazines and loaded them into the weapons. The whole process got their adrenaline going. They were ready to change the world. All 24 of them headed out towards the transport helicopter. Two by two they stepped in and filled it, and then closed the door. The helicopter took off, and they stared out the small windows of it. They looked at their home land, realizing it would be a while before they’d be on the ground safely if that ever even happened.
Desmond felt very uneasy. He doubted the mission. “What if the guards get Alpay out of his room and get him away before we can get him?” he thought to himself. “We would be caught in a firefight with some of the most well trained men in the world. We’d all perish.” He pushed the thoughts out of his mind. The officers would not send them on a mission like this if there wasn’t a good chance of success, he assured himself. He looked out the windows to get his thoughts off the op. The hours went by, and Desmond stared out at the country below him.
All of the land of the Ottoman Empire had the same dreary aura to it. The people of former countries were oppressed to say the least. They had many unanswered prayers, hopes, and dreams, trying to escape from a prison with invisible walls. They were waiting for the day to come when they would be liberated, for the day when they would have freedom. They always seemed to get their hopes up, and then they’d hear of another victory for the empire, and they’d sink into utter despair. Desmond realized that freedom in the world was on a decline, and the places where people were free were becoming less numbered. Desmond planned on moving either Rome or Germany soon, for because of the location of those countries they’d probably be the last to be conquered by the Ottoman Empire. He believed, along with many other people, that during his lifetime those two nations would be the last free nations.
Once they flew over the originally Turkish areas, despair turned into zeal. The people were ‘good’ communists. They turned in anyone expected of treason, talked and acted as if they were propaganda, and worked very hard to help the nation achieve the goal of world domination. It was the ideal totalitarian state.
Desmond began to feel much more nervous as they came closer to Istanbul. The talking among the operatives had ceased. They were seeing the elephant. The pilot then started naming off intervals of their estimated time of arrival. It started at a half an hour and they got closer and closer to Istanbul. “ETA thirty seconds,” the pilot said. Desmond’s heart started to pound. A few seconds later he looked out the window and saw the palace. It was white with a simple rectangular yet appealing design. It had a golden dome, and was the building was an example of traditional Eastern architecture. The helicopter got closer and closer to the building. The roof had a short parapet that looked like a white banister. It had columns side by side. He could make out a few figures on the roof. They were guards. The helicopter changed direction, now heading straight for the palace. Their altitude was hardly above the palace’s, and they only dropped a little. The helicopter turned, and the doors slid open. “Move! Move! Move!” The commander of the operation yelled.
The operatives jumped out of the helicopter. Red Team jumped out first. The guards had stopped their patrol and were facing the helicopter. Most of the guards patrolled the perimeter of the palace, not expecting an airborne attack, and there were only 4 on the roof. They did not know what was happening. And then Red Team opened fire on them. They all were hit without having time to fire back. Desmond’s team jumped out next. He lead the way, and motioned for them to follow right behind them. Time was of the essence.
He sprinted towards to door leading to the inside. He didn’t stop running when he got to it and just kicked it. The kick, fueled by adrenaline, was very powerful and knocked over the door. He sprinted down the stairs, his fellow operatives right behind. He immediately fired at a nearby guard patrolling the hallway. The bullets tore right through the guard’s brown uniform. The guard fell to his knees, and then to the ground. The operatives behind him shot at the guards across the balcony looking over the main floor. There were two of them, and they both were hit and fell almost instantly. Desmond then opened fire at a guard guarding Recber’s bedroom. The guard almost had time to fire back, but he was hit in the stomach several times and then in the neck. He slumped over and fell to the ground. His team sprinted towards Recber’s bedroom. Another guard from across the balcony peaked out from behind the corner of a wall and fired at them, but he missed and stepped back for cover.
“THEY’RE GOING FOR THE GENERAL!! THEY’RE GOING AFTER THE GENERAL!! RUN!! RUN!! QUICK!!” He screamed at the tops of his lungs in Turkish. There was more alarmed yelling from the guards and they sprinted towards the stairs from the main floor. The first few to get up were immediately taken out by the members of Blue and Gold teams. Every time a guard came into view he fell.
Desmond got to the bedroom. He pushed open the door and stormed into the room. He grabbed and threw General Alpay out of his bed. He was big and strong but almost fell over, being very groggy and not understanding what was happening. Desmond pushed him forward and the team ran out the room pushing Alpay along. They sprinted for the stairs. More alarmed, yelling guards were coming, running up the stairs yelling and firing on the SORU operatives. Then a large group of them ran up the stairs all at once. The operatives covering fired upon them. A few were hit, but the others fired back. The soldier operative behind Desmond was hit several times. He was dead. Desmond grabbed him and carried him. The English never leave their dead behind. Another one of the guards stepped out from behind his cover and fired at the operatives covering Green Team. He hit one of them in several places. The operative still hung on and shot back and killed the guard.
Desmond ran his team up the stairs under heavy fire. The covering teams fired a little bit more and then sprinted after Green Team. They ran out into the open night sky. They were sprinting despite a couple of them carrying dead or wounded. Desmond dragged the dead one towards the helicopter, running as fast as he could. He saw Red Team operatives in front of him firing back at packs of guards chasing after the general. Desmond pushed Alpay and his wounded fellow soldier into the helicopter and jumped in himself. More operatives began jumping into the helicopter. In a few seconds they were all in except for Red Team. One by one the members of that team jumped into the helicopter, the others firing at the guards. One was hit, but he was thrown into the helicopter. The last one finally jumped in. The helicopter elevated. The doors were kept open so the operatives could fire at the guards. Once the helicopter was in the air, the doors were closed. The guards stopped firing. One raised up his weapon, but another one put it down and explained to him it wasn’t a good idea to cause the helicopter that the General was in to crash.
The whole thing happened so fast. It may have been less than 25 seconds. Desmond thought about it, and he realized how lucky he was not to get shot. He had gotten very close to being killed, and the thought of it made him feel sick.
OTTOMAN CRISIS CENTER, ISTANBUL
MAY 29
0045 HOURS
The Tayfur Haydar, the Chief Advisor, was by law in command when General Alpay was absent or unable to perform his duties. He had just been woken up and told of what had happened merely minutes ago. He stormed into the Crisis Center. It was a very large room full of aides, advisors, military officers, and other officials working at phone lines, trying to bring order to the situation. It was full of chaos and frantic people. “Could somebody tell me how this could possibly happen?” Tayfur demanded.
One of his aides answered. “English special forces landed on the rooftop, took out the guards, stormed into the palace, took the General, and ran out.”
“I know what happened, you d**ned fool, I want to know why and how it happened.” The captain of the Palace Guards, Nihat Mustafa, walked by, and Tayfur furiously questioned him. “How could you be stupid enough to let this happen?! The General is the most important man in the world, and you have such little security for him that a few English captured him without much of a fight!”
“Sir, we never expected this to happen. The air traffic is very regulated, and it is almost impossible for an aircraft to somehow get by and get to the palace by air. So most of our guards patrol the yards and perimeter of the palace grounds. The guards on the top floor where outnumbered and overwhelmed. They got Alpay away just seconds before several large groups of guards got to them.”
“Never in the history of the Empire has anything so terrible happened!” Tayfur bellowed. Several people shamefully looked up, and then went back to their work.
“Calm down, comrade,” Alpay Kerimoglu haughtily replied. “Yelling won’t get us anywhere,” he corrected. He was the General’s only son, and very arrogant. Tayfur could not stand him. He would have taken Kerimoglu out with Turkish (formerly Korean) martial arts if he wasn’t the General’s relative.
“Sir, the Prime Minister of England is on the phone,” his aide told him. Tayfur went into the conference room, closed the door, and picked up the red phone. It was a fairly decent size room with a large round table in it. The wall between it and the crisis room was glass.
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