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As a one post "micro" story it gets its point across well. I would like to have seen more development of the characters and a more expansive storyline. Much could come from what little you have written (but I understand the time constraints involved). All in all a truly capital idea!!
The moral struggle that Shaw must have undergone to become his own person would have been a great story in itself. Nt to mention the back door pressure his party would have applied.
Very enjoyable piece and very insightful.
The moral struggle that Shaw must have undergone to become his own person would have been a great story in itself. Nt to mention the back door pressure his party would have applied.
Very enjoyable piece and very insightful.
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