Announcement

Collapse
No announcement yet.

Spanish Losses, Victories, and Stories - 10 A.D.

Collapse
X
 
  • Filter
  • Time
  • Show
Clear All
new posts

  • Spanish Losses, Victories, and Stories - 10 A.D.

    SPANISH LOSSES IN 10-30 A.D.

    Killed

    Order of the Blood of Christ (MI - Zaragosa)
    Order of the Cross (MI - Zaragosa)
    Order of the Sacred Name (MI - Zaragosa)
    St. Isadore's Lancers (MI- Zaragosa)
    St. Peter's Brigate (Pike - Zaragosa)
    Swiss Guard (Pike - Zaragosa)
    Swiss Guard (Pike - Zaragosa)
    Vigo Guard (Pike - Vigo)

    Wounded

    Knights of St. John (MI - Zaragosa) - 2/5 (promoted to elite)
    God's Wrath (MI - Zaragosa) - 1/4
    Order of the Holy Spirit (MI - Zaragosa) - 3/4

    Present for the Battle(s) but Unwounded

    Riders of the Holy Spirit (Horse - Zaragosa)
    Riders of the Son (Horse - Zaragosa)
    Riders of the Father (Horse- Zaragosa)

    PCs present with units that were killed

    Antonio Clemente (Arnelos) - Order of the Blood of Christ (MI - Zaragosa)
    Miguel Clemente (Arnelos) - Order of the Cross (MI - Zaragosa)
    Spamish Mitchell (mrmitchell) - Order of the Sacred Name (MI - Zaragosa)
    Domingo Nunez de Vigo (LzPrst) - Vigo Garrison (Pike - Vigo)

    PCs present for the battle(s), but not with killed units

    Duke Aidun Cian (Aidun) - Duke of Zaragosa, Lord Chamberlain of the House of Lords. Currenty very ill.
    Aidun Cian the younger (Aidun) - Heir to Duke Aidun Cian. Age 11. Lives in Zaragosa.
    Viscounte Juan-Carlos Nunez de Vigo (LzPrst) - bureaucrat (Vigo)

    -----------

    As for Togas and dejon, their PCs would almost certainly have been in Pamplona, given our expectation that Pamplona rather than Zaragosa might be attacked this turn. Both the King and his General were therefore almost certainly in Pamplona prepairing for that city's defense.

    Zaragosa was attacked while its lord, Duke Aidun Cian, was deathly ill. Duke Aidun's brother was in far off Legoland and his 11 year old son was not yet old enough to command the forces in the battle.

    This leaves the following PCs as those who could have commanded our defense of Zaragosa in the battle:

    Antonio Clemente (Arnelos)
    Miguel Clemente (Arnelos)
    Spamish Mitchell (mrmitchell)

    All three of these were with units that were killed, though we could certainly have one of them survive (likely one of mine) so that a "battlefield promotion" would take place. I'm going to start writing a story for this and others are welcome to write their own, but please consult me on it so we get our story straight (mrmitchell obviously should write of the death of Spamish Mitchell upon the field if he chooses to have Spamish Mitchell die as he previously stated).

    As for me, I'll probably have one of my 2 PCs present die with his unit, the other survive the initial fight to lead whatever comes next (need a next chapter to this story anyhow).

    I should get started on this if I'm ever going to finish it...
    Long-time poster on Apolyton and WePlayCiv
    Consul of Apolyton from the 1st Civ3 Inter-Site Democracy Game (ISDG)
    7th President of Apolyton in the 1st Civ3 Democracy Game

  • #2
    We also need a story from LzPrst about the fall of Vigo.
    Long-time poster on Apolyton and WePlayCiv
    Consul of Apolyton from the 1st Civ3 Inter-Site Democracy Game (ISDG)
    7th President of Apolyton in the 1st Civ3 Democracy Game

    Comment


    • #3
      Ok, the following is the concept for my story:

      Miguel Clemente, nephew of Senor Francisco Clemente, was the commander on the field at Zaragosa.

      Miguel, with the Order of the Cross, was slain in the battle.

      Spamish Mitchell, longtime Squid man and with the Order of the Sacred Name, was also slain valiantly in the battle, but his full story needs to be told by mrmitchell, not me.

      Upon Miguel's death on the field, his younger cousin, Antonio (younger son of Senor Francisco Clemente), who was in command of the Order of the Blood of Christ, is given a battlefield promotion to command of the Zaragosa garrison.

      Antonio is now with the Knights of St. John (our elite unit at 2/5), but could be conceivably with any of the units in Zaragosa, including the riders.

      The death scene of Miguel is the part that I'll need to focus on, of course.

      As for mrmitchell, we need a story for the valiant death of Spamish Mitchell defending the walls of Zaragosa with the Order of the Sacred Name.
      Long-time poster on Apolyton and WePlayCiv
      Consul of Apolyton from the 1st Civ3 Inter-Site Democracy Game (ISDG)
      7th President of Apolyton in the 1st Civ3 Democracy Game

      Comment


      • #4
        Ooh! I'm dead. Time to cook something up.

        Spamish Mitchell
        Dead Squid Baron
        meet the new boss, same as the old boss

        Comment


        • #5
          Btw, Togas asked me to come up with a Commander for our attack last turn. I came up with an elder Dejon retiree forced back into service - Joseph Dejon. He was the one that provided the comments for the public forum post Togas made. He is with the Knights of St. John MedInf unit.

          Comment


          • #6
            As soon as I have some time, I´ll write a story about Pandrito Nurendo Winterius, a distant relative who fought in Santiago.
            I think I had requested the command of the Knights of St John, though if dejon wants tehm I have no objection, just let me know if they´re free so that I can write a story for them.
            Besides of them , I am with the two swiss pikes company that are in Pamplona , IIRC. So I cna write something about the enchampment in Pamplona, the preparations against the siege and all...
            Señor Nuclearis Winterius the III,
            Diplomat with the Voxians, and also
            Señor Pablo Winterius, missionary Bishop and Archbishop of the Roleplay team

            Comment


            • #7
              Originally posted by dejon
              Btw, Togas asked me to come up with a Commander for our attack last turn. I came up with an elder Dejon retiree forced back into service - Joseph Dejon. He was the one that provided the comments for the public forum post Togas made. He is with the Knights of St. John MedInf unit.
              That's good to know for my story. Hmm... how on earth am I going to add him in?

              Well, I'll have to do it somehow, even though this thing is already 15 paragraphs and this guy hasn't popped up yet (I'll have to write him in earlier, I guess).
              Long-time poster on Apolyton and WePlayCiv
              Consul of Apolyton from the 1st Civ3 Inter-Site Democracy Game (ISDG)
              7th President of Apolyton in the 1st Civ3 Democracy Game

              Comment


              • #8
                What sort of Spanish name is "Joseph"?

                Oh well, I'll write it in somehow
                Long-time poster on Apolyton and WePlayCiv
                Consul of Apolyton from the 1st Civ3 Inter-Site Democracy Game (ISDG)
                7th President of Apolyton in the 1st Civ3 Democracy Game

                Comment


                • #9
                  Done:

                  The Battle of Zaragosa

                  In the tenth year of our lord, the infidel Neu Demogypticans came to the holy city of Zaragosa with all the cruel and heinous might of their evil empire. A truly monstrous army of their Ansar warriors rode upon a fateful day to the holy city and prepaired to assualt its fortifications.

                  However, unlike the other cities which the mighty infidel armies had previously assaulted in Spain, Zaragosa was at least moderately well garrisoned. Not a very large garrison, but certainly a capable one for its size. The situation would certainly have been far more dire for Zaragosa had General Dejon of the King's Army not wisely consolidated the meager garrisons of Santiago and Zaragosa together into Zaragosa while gifting Santiago to our Stormian allies. Even so, the foul armies of the heinous Neu Demogypticans greatly outnumbereda and outclassed those defending Christiandom that day.

                  Within the holy walls of the city on his deathbed lay Duke Aidun Cian, Lord Chamberlain of the House of Lords. Deathly ill for the past several years and unable to tend to his lands, the responsibility might have fallen to his younger brother. However, Senor Diomingo Cian was serving as the Spanish Ambassador to Legoland and had not yet been recalled from that assignment when Duke Aidun fell deathly ill. So it was that Aidun Cian the Younger, an 11 year old boy, was the only heir to the Dukedom of Zaragosa able to stand upright that day.

                  So it was that Duke Dejon, General of the King's Army, had given command of the garrison to his relative Senor Joseph Dejon and his lietenant, Senor Miguel Clemente, nephew of the famous Senor Francisco Clemente, the Special Representative of Spain to Spain's Stormian Allies. Miguel, an able-bodied man in his early 30s, though he had long undergone training to fight in war due to his rank in Spanish society, was in his heart a man of mercy and peace. From the time he was a small boy, his elders had pressed down upon him his responsibility as a man of noble rank to learn the ways of war and of the killing of his fellow man for the protection of Spain. But even then, he had desired none of this.

                  Miguel was, first and foremost, a highly religious man. From the time of his childhood, he had always been deeply spiritual, contemplative, and introspective. It was difficult even for his parents to even fully understand his private and deeply spiritual nature. Where Miguel had always found his outlet was in prayer, typically prayers of confession. As Miguel developed into an adolescent and eventually man, he came to accept his role in Spanish society and chose to serve Spain by becoming a leader of other men in battle, but he remained a deeply religious and humble man who seemed fixated with his need to atone for his sins and transgressions against god.

                  That day in Zaragosa, standing atop the walls of the holy city amid the papal banners of the Crusades, Miguel had a mix of emotions. He was proud to be fighting for Spain, prouder still to be fighting in defense of god's one and only true church. The pride felt at being a holy crusader truly could not be matched. Even so, he had the pang of regret for the position in which fate had placed him. He knew this day that he would oversee the death of many men, good men, both Christian and even infidel. Why was this slaughter necessary, he wondered, and why was it necessary that he should be one of those to direct it?

                  Also present that day atop the walls of the holy city of Zaragosa was Miguel's younger cousin, Antonio. Antonio, youngest son of the famous Senor Francisco Clemente, was the commanding officer of the Order of the Blood of Christ. A younger man, in his mid 20s, Antonio was brash and young, at times even foolish. He had always been a loud and perhaps even obnoxious child, though possessing a quit wit and a delightful sense of humor. He had largely accepted his obligation to learn the arts of war in stride, as with many things in his life, and while he took his studies of the art as seriously as he took anything in life, those around him seemed always concerned that he lacked the proper gravity generally exhibited by Spanish nobles trained to serve in war. The start of the war and the invasion of the infidel forces of the Neu Demogypticans had done much to dampen young Antonio's spirits, however. Though still a bright and amicable young man, he was nowhere nearly as cheery as his normal self.

                  Atop the battlements that day, Miguel was worried for his men, worried for Zaragosa, worried for Spain, but also worried for his cousin Antonio. But as the infidels began the first of their many assaults against the walls of the holy city that day, Miguel and General Joseph Dejon knew they had no time for such worries, they had to concentrate upon the defeat of the enemy.

                  The infidels came in wave after wave, scaling the walls of the city and battling its defenders upon the battlements, both sides fighting as fiercely as men can ever be expected to fight in a holy war. Countless men fell even in only the opening hour of the struggle and yet hundreds upon hundreds more were to die before the day was through. While the infidel invaders were as fierce and cruel as their repuations had lead the men of Spain to believe, the pikemen and the infantry of Spain fought desperately, valiantly, in the name of their homes, their wives, their lords, their king, their pope, and their god. They were fierce, they were brutal, they were magnificent. Each man died having spent the full measure of his remaining moments in this cruel world defending his homeland with every fiber of his being.

                  As the day wore on and men, both Christian and infidel, died all over the battlements of the holy city of Zaragosa, something amazing took place. The infidels, having suffered truly grievous and unexpected losses across their many hordes of Ansar warrior units throughout the battle, began to falter. It was then that the ancient Spamish Mitchell, present in the city that day, rose the papal banner above the Order of the Sacred Name and charged across the battlements, killing countless Ansar warriors in his path. Miguel, looking to capitalize upon this development and to stand with the brave Spamish Mitchell in this time, charged the what little remained of his Order of the Cross and fought one last and desperate fight agianst the Ansar warriors on the south wall while General Joseph Dejon was commanding the counter-attack on the west wall.

                  As Spamish Mitchell charged on into a thicket of Ansar Warriors to drive them back off of the walls of the city, it was then that a blow struck Senor Miguel Clemente. Antonio, not far away on the south wall, saw his cousin fall and ran with what remained of the Order of the Blood of Christ to protect the body of his kin. Fighting fiercely alongside the noble and ever-brave Spamish Mitchell, they battled off the Ansar hordes at last and sent them into a full rout from the walls of the holy city.

                  With a fullscale rout of the infidels in progress, Spamish Mitchell ran on to lead the remaining Spanish forces driving the Ansar warriors off of the walls of the city while Antonio dropped down to attend to his cousin.

                  Miguel Clemente, a man of peace, forced to fight in a war he hated, now lay partially upright with blood all over him upon the battlements of the holy city of Zaragosa. Antonio, tears in his eyes, clenched the hand of his older cousin and asked him what he wished. Miguel, caughing and growing weak, called for a priest for his last rights and while this was taking place, he clenched his cross to his chest and gave his own prayer. A prayer for the salvation of Spain, the salvation of this city and its noble people, his brave men who had fought and died with honor that day in the name of their lord, and even for the dead of his enemy.

                  He then turned to Antonio, tears also in his own eyes, and told him to carry on and fight for the defense of this brave city and the memory of the brave men who gave their lives for Spain and the Church. Victory was theirs that day and many a man had had to die to see the Ansar hordes so humiliated as to rout from a battle they might have otherwise won. But in such dark times as these, Spain must take whatever victories it could. Miguel told Antonio to give his respects to their fathers before he closed his eyes for one final and silent prayer with his cross clutched to his chest before passing away from this cruel world.

                  It was thus that Miguel Clemente, man of peace, passed from this world and Antonio Clemente had the responsibility for helping General Joseph Dejon with the defense of the city of Zaragosa from the vile enemy. After the priest had finished his his duties and the body of Miguel was taken away, Antonio gave out a cry, raised the papal banner, and charged with the remainder of all of his strength.

                  It was then that he came around the wall and met up with General Joseph Dejon, who was leading the glorious and elite Knights of St. John, low in numbers though they had become, against the remnants of the Ansar warriors upon the west wall. It was then that Antonio related to Joseph how Miguel had fallen and the bravery of the men in the field. Joseph Dejon, a much older man experienced in the horrors of war, turned toward the young Antonio and said that Miguel would not be forgotten, nor any of the brave men who fell that day. Spain would fight on and at least for the men remaining, the walls of Zaragosa had held that day for them and the infidels were routed.

                  It was later that Senor Joseph Dejon conferred with his new lietenant, Antonio Clemente, about the orders they had received from his relative, General Dejon, in Pamplona...

                  (note: the continued story of the heroic acts of Spamish Mitchell at the Battle of Zaragosa will be told by mrmitchell)
                  Long-time poster on Apolyton and WePlayCiv
                  Consul of Apolyton from the 1st Civ3 Inter-Site Democracy Game (ISDG)
                  7th President of Apolyton in the 1st Civ3 Democracy Game

                  Comment


                  • #10
                    Any suggestions before public posting?
                    Long-time poster on Apolyton and WePlayCiv
                    Consul of Apolyton from the 1st Civ3 Inter-Site Democracy Game (ISDG)
                    7th President of Apolyton in the 1st Civ3 Democracy Game

                    Comment


                    • #11
                      publicly posted
                      Long-time poster on Apolyton and WePlayCiv
                      Consul of Apolyton from the 1st Civ3 Inter-Site Democracy Game (ISDG)
                      7th President of Apolyton in the 1st Civ3 Democracy Game

                      Comment


                      • #12
                        I had a story. 2 hrs worth of work, but it mysteriously disappeared. I'll compose another later today and post it here.
                        Diplogamer formerly known as LzPrst

                        Comment


                        • #13
                          Colonel Domingo Nuñez de Vigo, the commander of the Vigo garrison and all military units in the Vigo region stands on the hastily prepared battlements of the city, angrily observing the enemy embark from their ships and establishing a camp right outside the city limits.
                          How dare they! If only there were some real soldiers here he’d charge out this minute and they’d all know not to step unto Spanish soil. But only a skeleton defence remains. The heavy infantry stationed here earlier has been ordered to the front lines elsewhere. Left are a group of pikemen, local militia given some training with a spear. None of these men have seen real combat. How am I to defend the west, he mumbles, left with only a few watchmen and a bunch of volunteering farm boys. Luckily reinforcements are on the way from the south… And there’s always my cousin Edgar with his Iron Cross Guard, protectors of the Iron mines of Vigo. Perhaps it is time to recall them to help with the cities’ defences, the Iron mines be damned, if General Dejon wanted a supply of iron he would’ve sent more troops to bolster our defences. These children can’t hold the city for long if the enemy attacks.
                          Colonel! I have a message from Capitan Edgar, sir! A weary man on horseback has just arrived at the newly-built defences. Give it here! the characteristic whisky-cracked voice of the colonel rebounds through the camp. Are they finally coming? He tears the paper from the young messengers quivering hands and rips it open.

                          Columns of dust. Large number, headed this way, moving slowly, probably not cavalry. Cpt. ENdV.
                          Strange, all information about the enemy indicates that they have appeared from out of the wind, riding lighting fast horses, a great horde of them. Not slow-moving infantry. The attack must come any day now. The colonel orders a group of scouts to investigate the approaching army, then returns to his tent. There he opens a bottle of fine Pamplonian whisky and pours a glass. I mustn’t drink too much, he reminded himself, emptying the glass quickly and putting away the bottle. Those reinforcements better arrive soon…

                          The following day the scouts returned. –Colonel, Sir! It’s not an army, just a large number of refugees from Santiago, sir. Santiago had fallen a few weeks ago. A curse on all foolish civilians, there’s no room for them here, food supplies are already strained due to the preparations in the event of a siege. The arab invaders from the sea weren’t doing much, they were still building a base camp. Perhaps there was still time… The colonel’s throat was feeling very dry, the waiting made him thirsty, inspecting troops in the dry streets and dusty training grounds made it worse. I’ll be in my tent if anything happens. he croaked to one of his officers. Just a glass, that would be all. He filled his glass, looking curiously at the bottle, there was hardly anything left. Someone must have stolen a few jigs. It didn’t matter now, he sipped the harsh liquid and smiled. If they could sneak into his tent and steal whisky while he was sleeping there they had to be damn good. The colonel emptied his glass and refilled it with the remains of the bottle. He’d have to make arrangements for those refugees eventually…

                          The following weeks were very stressing, the refugees were flooding the city, his uncle, the Viscount wasn’t being very helpful either, dabbling with the other city politicians where to place the new city hall, easily ignoring a war was on. He’d ordered the more well-off people of the city to take in at least two refugees each, this meant splitting families, and stepping on the toes of the rich and mighty, but if anyone dared complain he’d kick them out of the city in direction the arab encampment. Why weren’t they doing anything!? They just stayed there, training, scouting and avoiding all signs of trouble. They must be waiting for something, they’d probably attack the very day they’d see the first riders from the north, but there was no sign of a great horde yet… The waiting was driving him insane, he felt it. And he still hadn’t discovered who had been stealing his scotch. By now he’d run out of his fine Pamplona brand and resorted to cheaper local sorts. If it was to disappear like that, why spend all his wages on it.

                          Summer had turned to fall, and still nothing. The refugees had finally settled in and were less of a nuisance, but the city was still overcrowded, and there was no food stored in the granary this month. At least there’d be some excess next month, the farmers were about to start the harvest. But would it be enough for the winter if they had to wait out an enemy army?
                          Of course not, but maybe they wouldn’t come until next year. Then the reinforcements would be here, there’d be enough food, maybe the damn arabs outside the coast would run out of food and surrender. Thinking like a child, again, he reprimanded himself for his foolish hopes. In real life it didn’t happen like that. Santiago, now Leon had fallen. It would only be a matter of time, unless those bloody reinforcements didn’t show up soon. He found himself pouring another glass of scotch. I’m drinking too much, he muttered, I’d better be careful…

                          The cold of winter was approaching, there was snow in the mountains now, in a few weeks it’d come to the city, then an attack would be out of the question. The arabs weren’t used to the cold, he’d seen from an outpost placed on the mountains how they kept indoors, if they stayed any longer they’d have to built permanent housing, he thought. Colonel de Vigo! Turning to face a man on horseback wearing royal colours riding slowly into camp with two companions, his heart leaped, this must be the reinforcements. -Message from high command, colonel. the tall bearded man dismounted and bowed. His clothing was ragged leather, but it was lined with silk, now ruined from sweat and hard riding. Just a royal courier. No commander, no soldiers to bolster defences. He received the letter, broke the seal of the General and read. His eyes narrowed then he threw the paper on the ground. WHAT IS THIS!? MADNESS!!! I will not accept these orders! –You shall or you will be relieved of command, I have the authority to replace you with any other capable man in this garrison.
                          Has the general lost his mind! the colonel screamed, soldiers had stopped to look at their raging commander, eyes protruding and spit flying from his lips by every word. –Do not cause further embarrassment for yourself, colonel. You have your orders, we will ride to inform your cousin on the mountain as well, these orders stand. The messenger remounted and beckoning to his companions rode out of there. No reinforcements!? It was not possible! The colonel was close to losing his temper. Not in front of the men, he thought, charging across the grounds to his tent he drew his sword, swearing in a snarl he smashed his oak chair in half with a single blow. He opened another bottle and filled a glass, hands trembling.
                          Fools, damn fools. he muttered.

                          High in the mountains above, Edgar Nuñez de Vigo had received his orders. A squat broad-shouldered man with his long dark hair hanging in a pony tail, he seemed like a wild boar. Short, powerful and a slightly protruding jaw made the image complete. His men used to call him the Boar, he thought it silly, but never discouraged it. His fury in battle was well known, once he had chased off a band of marauders single-handedly. There had been six of them and only two made it off. He had heard the story from someone else later, though according to the corporal there had been thirty men and none had survived. It was all amusing in a way, but now these tale-telling kids would be involved in real war, against well-trained soldiers. Chasing petty criminals and flirting with miners’ daughters didn’t really constitute combat training. He felt sorry for the boys, those of more experience trained constantly, trying to prepare the younger for what was soon to come. Especially one young boy, so nervous that he could not keep down his meals, was running back and forth from the latrine. Oh well, at least we’ll have the advantage of our defensive works and knowledge of the mountains on our side.
                          Capitaaan! one of the scouters came running like the hounds of hell were behind him. –the, the, *wheeze*, the arabs are moving. Strange, he thought, there had still been no sign of riders, why on earth were they coming now?

                          In the city total chaos had ensued, the arabs had charged the battlements with little difficulty, and only half the garrison was there, the other half was stationed on the other side of the city in case the horde should show up. Sergeant Eduardo was doing his best to keep the enemy out, but having no real walls and being outnumbered 2 to 1 made the task near impossible. The colonel was nowhere to be seen and the boys fighting were all terrified. A curved scimitar slashed his face and he was blinded by his own blood covering his eyes. On the other side of the city the other division was trying to push through throngs of panicked people packed in the narrow streets. By the time they arrived at the other garrison the arabs had finished off the last of the resistance, they were tired, but bloodlust shone in their eyes. The arrival of more men surprised the attackers and for a few minutes it looked as they were about to retreat. Then their leader rallied his men and drove them forth. A few minutes later the remaining defenders had retreated to the training grounds. The enemy was everywhere, throwing torches and attacking anyone in their way. Stumbling out of his tent the colonel shouted for order, but the look of their commander piss drunk was not an encouraging sight. The very second a bearded man came running into the camp, one of the tougher soldiers charged at him spear ready and skewered him only to be cut down seconds later trying to free his pike. The drunken colonel stared in disbelief at the scene, then stormed at the enemy while drawing his sword. He slashed at a nearby foe and missed pathetically, the blood soaked warrior looked at him then sliced his head clean off. The last of the Vigo Guard turned and fled, they were shown little mercy.

                          Watching the rising columns of smoke from the city, Edgar de Nuñez stands shocked, how could this happen? He knew the defenders were capable of holding their ground, his cousin had always been a strong man and a good leader. Had not reinforcements arrived, surely his cousin would have called them to his aid if the enemy was strong enough to take the city. Vigo was more important than the mines, why hadn’t they been summoned to assist the defenders if there were no reinforcements? His mind raced remembering the courier who had ordered him to not leave the mines regardless of what would happen below. The capitan thought the arabs might try to lure them off the mountain, but if this was the lure… Burning Vigo? The fools in high command have abandoned us, they have betrayed Vigo and all its people. Damn them! The Boar unhinged his blade from his back, it was shaped like a thin triangle, one side sharp, the other blunt. It was a powerful sword made for a powerful man, similar to an elongated axeblade. The miners were all gathered around watching the scene below, noone saw him walk deep into the main shaft. In the gloom he found one of the support columns, they were made of strong wood taken from the jungles near Santiago. With a scream he swung his enormous weapon and smashed the thick block of wood. Walking a short distance he destroyed another, and another, he felt the tons of stone above him groan and began walking towards the small light made by the sun setting, cutting support beams every few meters. Then he ran the last thirty meters as the cave collapsed behind him. If high command had wanted the mines, they should have protected the city better. They should know better than to value iron higher than the lives of thousands of Spanish citizens. Now no one would have the damn mines and the capitan cared for nothing but getting his men out of there alive. He would have his revenge, on the arabs, on high command, on General Dejon himself.
                          Diplogamer formerly known as LzPrst

                          Comment


                          • #14
                            too much?
                            Diplogamer formerly known as LzPrst

                            Comment


                            • #15
                              No, it sounds great!

                              Comment

                              Working...
                              X