Realpolitic

[Panzer32]

There has been much excitement in our forum, eagerly anticipating new members. As you know, GoW had a military alliance with ND, and enjoys a peaceful relationship with RP, trading techs with all. As China, we have a very mobile UU coming soon, with the militaristic trait. Until then, our industrious trait will help us grow into a vibrant civ. Join the party!

CHANGE THIS SO THAT IT DOESN'T SOUND LIKE WE HAD SUCH GOOD COOPERATION WITH ND!! NOW!!

Try:

There has been much excitement in our forum, eagerly anticipating new members. As you know, GoW was involved in the Lux campaign, and currently has a peaceful relationship with all civs. We are looking foreward to a period of building of our infrastructure now that Lux has perished, and we will be soon coming into an exciting time in our empire. Join the party!

[realpolitic]

Re: Realpolitic

Originally posted by Panzer32


CHANGE THIS SO THAT IT DOESN'T SOUND LIKE WE HAD SUCH GOOD COOPERATION WITH ND!! NOW!!

I got rid of the cooperation with ND but I think I was just restaing the obvious. I rewrote it so it looks like we're just some hard working folks trying to earn an honest dollar.

Here's the new text:

Originally posted by realpolitic
There has been eagerly anticipating new members.GoW enjoys a peaceful relationship with all, trading techs with all who act in good faith. Since we are Industrious, we are planning to build our infrastructure, and now at the cessesion of hostilities have plenty of land to do it. Join the party!

[Panzer32]

Thanks... I just would rather be safe than sorry.

(Sorry I had to shout!)