Originally posted by zeit
Looks fine- a bit direct on the last paragraph, but I'm sure they'll appreciate it now that all hell broke loose...
Oh, and on Paragraph 2, 3rd sentence: you've put a "it" instead of "if"
Looks fine- a bit direct on the last paragraph, but I'm sure they'll appreciate it now that all hell broke loose...
Oh, and on Paragraph 2, 3rd sentence: you've put a "it" instead of "if"

I agree I was direct. I usually am.
-Arrian
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