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  • Death and Night and Blood

    no one lived, they never did
    to tell the tale the way it went.
    the sound of hooves then nothing left
    but death and night and blood

    two nations proud with doubled shield,
    a third in shadow sealed the deal
    two with horses, swift of hoof
    one with structure, far, aloof

    nor grass nor wood, nor hill nor plain
    would give respite from endless pain
    as formless foe strikes here and there
    then vanishing like deadly rain

    a quest to turn the tide of fate
    a bid, a hope, a chance, a stake
    to flip the dice as ancient cast
    and melt the ice to carve a pass

    when last we got to raise our sword
    so from the shadow stepped the third
    ok, we call - we know the score
    all against - as told in lore

    save one, our friend we fought to save
    in hill and forest all over spain
    till refuge we would offer them
    in our homes as kith and kin

    so sleep was banished
    and thoughts were forged
    as every effort was bent towards
    a deal to keep our friends alive
    to find a peace so they'd survive

    but then to even more dismay
    our gesture spun another way
    as propaganda against ourselves
    'those evil stormies' came the howls

    yet there was more to our lament
    for to our friends our foe had bent
    and wooed with praise and high regard
    whilst dammning us with splintered shards

    no one knows how many came
    no one knows to where they went
    the sound of hooves, then nothing left
    but death and night and blood

  • #2
    Very Nice.
    One who has a surplus of the unorthodox shall attain surpassing victories. - Sun Pin
    You're wierd. - Krill

    An UnOrthOdOx Hobby

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    • #3
      Thanks UnO

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      • #4
        I am impressed.
        Aggie
        The 5th President, 2nd SMC and 8th VP in the Civ3 Demogame. Also proud member of the GOW team in the PTW game. Peace through superior firepower.

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        • #5
          Wow

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          • #6
            Wow, that's wonderful.

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            • #7
              Wow, where did that come from??!! The Fall of the War Chickens, indeed!!
              The greatest delight for man is to inflict defeat on his enemies, to drive them before him, to see those dear to them with their faces bathed in tears, to bestride their horses, to crush in his arms their daughters and wives.

              Duas uncias in puncta mortalis est.

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              • #8
                where did that come from?
                Well, the title came from a song by The Stranglers off the Black & White album 1978.

                Apart from that it's all original - as far as I know. Being a LOTR fan, the rhythm and tone was possibly inspired by "Gilgalad was an Elven King, of him the harpers sadly sing ..." etc

                IMV, tragedy works better emotionally in poems and prose than glory, so it occurred to me that the Stormian perspective is ideally positioned to contibute to the cultural-historical record.

                There's also a serious propaganda gap here to be addressed, but that's by-the-by

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                • #9
                  Since we're talking poetry, I thought I'd share a little ditty popular in the Legopolis pubs...

                  Jimmy was a blockhead, Jenny was a square
                  people always told them they made the perfect pair.
                  But one night in the bedroom, Jimmy caught his peg
                  now Jim has got an empty spot, and Jen an extra leg.
                  I make movies. Come check 'em out.

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                  • #10
                    Very good.

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                    • #11
                      Excellent Cort Haus. It's been too long since we've seen posts like this in the public forum.

                      I remember laughing so loud after reading the line: 'Grog fought like a girl.'

                      Let's bring those days back.
                      badams

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                      • #12


                        Exceptional work
                        "No Comment"

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                        • #13
                          I love the Stranglers. Haven't heard em in ages. Didn't know there was folks around around who actually listen to REAL Punk Rock!

                          Great Poem BTW
                          *"Winning is still the goal, and we cannot win if we lose (gawd, that was brilliant - you can quote me on that if you want. And con - I don't want to see that in your sig."- Beta

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                          • #14
                            con, real punk rock is as important as civ

                            Well, almost. I should be learning a new song arrangement now.

                            Thanks everyone, for the comments. I'd like to say to all players that I'm really enjoying the game, despite the challenges. As Aggie says on another thread, we are breaking experimental ground in team and civ dynamics, and as Jim Morrison said ".. proud to be a part of this number".

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                            • #15
                              Wow, nice work Cort Haus. About time we started getting these types of threads back.

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