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    When you have multiple phrases where one of the phrases consists of multiple words, it's a good idea to put that phrase first. For example: Instead of "Longship & Fluid Breathing" use "Fluid Breathing & Longship". This alleviates confusion. I had originally thought that "Chemistry & Ballista Towers" referred to Chemisty Towers and Ballista Towers. "Genetics & Correctional Facility" could be confused in the same way.

    It's not really that big of a deal, though. But the thought of longship breathing was quite humorous.

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    I for one would pay good money to see some Longship Breathing. INHALE, EXHALE, INHA- Ah! An oar's caught on my tooth!
    All syllogisms have three parts.
    Therefore this is not a syllogism.

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    • #3
      How about "Longship & Breathing Fluid?" That seems to be unambiguous.
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      (='.'=) "Claims demand evidence; extraordinary claims demand extraordinary evidence." -- Carl Sagan
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      • #4
        Fluid Breathing Longship?
        Breathing Fluid Longship?
        Fluid Longship Breathing?
        Longship Breathing Fluid?
        Breathing Longship Fluid?
        Longship Fluid Breathing?

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