OFFICIAL-Constitution of the Human Hive

[Voltaire]

The attached is the final draft of the proposed new constitution of the Human Hive. To pass it requires a 2/3 majority. It shall official come into effect on August 1st, elections for the positions will be held in the coming week.

To those wishing to amend the constitution at this time may use the write in option and propose an official amendment to a part of the constitution. Those wishing to do as such must use the proper format of the constitution, and must clearly indicate which portions of the constitution they wish to change by first providing a quote of the current draft, and then their own revisions with the revisions in bold.

Hive Constitution

-Chairman Voltaire

[Octavian X]

I'm afraid I have some complaints, namely a typo.

(2a) The Deputy Chairman has the right to:
-advise the Chairman in all matters of State.

'advice the Chairman' is not correct grammer.

Our state is called at least two different names in the docuement. Are the Hiverian and Hiverial? Both adjectives are used in the full name of our faction at different points in the docuement.

And, is it just me, or are the Conquistidor and the Central Military Committee completely redunant of each other?

[Kody]

Long term planning!

I would be good having someone figuring out the terraforming, base placement and tech research 50 turns into the future. At the moment I'm only thinking 4-10 turns ahead. With specialised departments spreading the work load it would become viable.

Kody

[Voltaire]

Originally posted by Octavian X
I'm afraid I have some complaints, namely a typo.

'advice the Chairman' is not correct grammer.

Our state is called at least two different names in the docuement. Are the Hiverian and Hiverial? Both adjectives are used in the full name of our faction at different points in the docuement.

And, is it just me, or are the Conquistidor and the Central Military Committee completely redunant of each other?

It’s supposed to be Hiverian (the other was a typo)... I didn't have anyone proofread it before I posted it so it's bound to have a few typos (and by a few I mean a lot).

[Kody]

It would be nice if the chain of command was a defined in a seperate section. Just to make it clearer for the readers.

Kody

[Jamski]

Would be good

-Jam

[Voltaire]

Originally posted by Kody
It would be nice if the chain of command was a defined in a seperate section. Just to make it clearer for the readers.

Kody

Will do.

[Voltaire]

New and improved constitution has been uploaded to replace the old one.

This one contains a chart to show the organization of the government.

Also remember to vote, this poll closes in 3 days.

-Chairman Voltaire

[Voltaire]

Also Comrade Kody if you could make a list of the avaliable positions under the new constitution it would be very much appreciated.

A nomination thread will be posted in 2 days time.

[Kody]

Ahh yeah I forgot about that *Slaps self*

So much stuff to remember to do.

Can I get a secretary?

Kody

[Voltaire]

Originally posted by Kody
Ahh yeah I forgot about that *Slaps self*

So much stuff to remember to do.

Can I get a secretary?

Kody

Sure... you better include that on the list of available positions.