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-------University Base, 2100-----------------
"Congratulations on a safe landing, General Kown. I hope your flight was as pleasant as mine," Provost Zakharov said to the General. The University of Planet had just founded their first base, University Base. Already there was a scout patrol surveying the area and another patrol, the one to guard the city, was almost fully trained. "It was a fine trip. A little bumpy at the end, but otherwise very enjoyable," Kown replied. "Good. Now, let's get to the council before they start without us," Said Zakharov, as he hurried down the chamber.
---------University Base, 2113---------------
General Kown sat in the Situation room. Their scout had just encountered the Human Hive, which had already set up three basas, one in the Monsoon Jungle. Kown was not suprised at the technology demands they made. The University gave in, of course, as the Hive's underground bases are very difficult to attack.
----------University Base, 2119--------------
Kown watched the footage with a frown. The Hive had sliced the Scout to pieces with their new Laser Rovers. Less than 20 years on Planet, at a war had already started. "How can humanity survive if they are destined to exterminate themselves?....."
-------University Base, 2100-----------------
"Congratulations on a safe landing, General Kown. I hope your flight was as pleasant as mine," Provost Zakharov said to the General. The University of Planet had just founded their first base, University Base. Already there was a scout patrol surveying the area and another patrol, the one to guard the city, was almost fully trained. "It was a fine trip. A little bumpy at the end, but otherwise very enjoyable," Kown replied. "Good. Now, let's get to the council before they start without us," Said Zakharov, as he hurried down the chamber.
---------University Base, 2113---------------
General Kown sat in the Situation room. Their scout had just encountered the Human Hive, which had already set up three basas, one in the Monsoon Jungle. Kown was not suprised at the technology demands they made. The University gave in, of course, as the Hive's underground bases are very difficult to attack.
----------University Base, 2119--------------
Kown watched the footage with a frown. The Hive had sliced the Scout to pieces with their new Laser Rovers. Less than 20 years on Planet, at a war had already started. "How can humanity survive if they are destined to exterminate themselves?....."