Hi, here's the first chapter for a fna fic i'm writing. I'll post more later on, but I'd really like some feedback and advice on how people think the plot should go.
Just to give a general overview, I'll summarize:
"Perhaps best described as a Romeo & Juliet of Alpha Centauri, this tells the story of a young Morganite Probe Team Captain who falls in love with none other than First Empath of the Gaians, Lindly Scott. Can their love overcome their faction's differences?"
read the rest here
thanks in advance!
Just to give a general overview, I'll summarize:
"Perhaps best described as a Romeo & Juliet of Alpha Centauri, this tells the story of a young Morganite Probe Team Captain who falls in love with none other than First Empath of the Gaians, Lindly Scott. Can their love overcome their faction's differences?"
read the rest here
thanks in advance!