Comments on The Ordinary People

[iMac722]

Well how did you think of my second story? The first was merely a prolouge of resident Evil 3, and to exercise my grammar skills and I have no intention of continuing it. so here you guys can post your comments on my second story "The Ordinary People" so whaddia think?

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And I asked him,
What is thy name?
And he replied saying:
My Name is iMac: for we
are many..

[iMac722]

Oh and OldCodger, I hope you can E-mail em and we can work on this my address is Imac722@aol.com