People of the Valley

[Paddy]

Thanks for your encouragement

Work has been crazy this past few weeks...

Should have more here in 24 hours...

[ChrisiusMaximus]

Im with those two Paddy, please come back and write some more of this lovely little story of yours

[Richelieu]

Originally posted by vovansim
So, how 'bout those goods you promised, Paddy? You've created a loyal audience with this here piece and it (the audience) wants goods. Well... I do.

Listen to the man Paddy: he knows what he's talking about!

[vovan]

So, how 'bout those goods you promised, Paddy? You've created a loyal audience with this here piece and it (the audience) wants goods. Well... I do.

[Paddy]

Thanks for that...

More to arrive soon...

[Richelieu]

Very good read! I hope you continue!

NB: It is "La France" and not "Le France", as suggested in another post.

[Paddy]

hahahaha

[ChrisiusMaximus]

Oh boy!! poor poor old Paddy gonna end up in Scratchy's story cleaning toilets with me and Dexters.

Dont be too afraid he sometimes makes us into heroes

[Paddy]

thanks for that............ I hope...........

[unscratchedfoot]

Bring on the war dude. Paddy, you're going into my next episode of Royal Service.

[Paddy]

Thanks.... translating the drunken into common... ahh it is fun.

[Kaos XIII]

Hey now, I like your activeness.

I've no constructive criticism to give, just mere encouragement.

So keep posting and keep these guys happy!

P.S, It's "Le France."

[Paddy]

Thanks for the feedback.

It helps in my learning, and enjoying this interesting craft.

[ChrisiusMaximus]

Great stuff

[vovan]

Good addition, Paddy, but I think that you are starting to depart from your original style a bit. While in the previous installments, you told this as a story, I think towards the end of this one, it is starting to seem more like just a recall of what you did in the game, event by event. While there is really nothing wrong with that, I kind of liked the creativity of the previous chapters more.