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Warlord
U.S.A
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Aug 2006
time: 21:18
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I wanted to start a story so here I am. I also want to know if the story is good, bad, allright so I'll accept
revues.
Chapter 1, The Begining
There is a tale, of a Civilisation that, during its time, came out on top. This Civilisation no longer exists, but its story servived through its many citizens of years past. it goes something like this.
In the begining, The world was a desolate ocean. In this ocean was little life. when the moon and the sun aligned a single piece of land would spring up. This called the gods attention. As the gods watched this planet and saw its on the dot cycle, an Idea formed. The Gods then came to the Earth and decided to create life. so the gods went about their buisness of clearing land placeing animals. When the work was done the gods chose one species to inharit the Earth and dwell in it. today this species is known as MAN...
It is dawn. the people of Persia have just today forsaken their nomadic lifestyle and have chosen a new leader to found their first city. although this leaders name is no longer known we do know their first city, Nikado City.a serch party was set out from Nikado City to scout the area. this would prove fruitful later on...
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